Chocolate— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Instead of saying "I started eating chocolate since I am one years old," say "I have liked chocolate since I was one year old." Also, try to add a reason why you like chocolate to make your answer more complete.

Exemplo: Yes, I really like eating chocolate because I have enjoyed it since I was one year old. It tastes sweet and makes me feel happy.

Sugestão: Your answer is direct and clear, which is good. To improve, you can add a reason or more detail to make your response richer. Also, try to use linking words if you add more information.

Exemplo: I eat chocolate every morning because it gives me energy to start my day.

Sugestão: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical errors. Use past tense consistently, for example, "I always ate chocolate every day because my mom gave me two pieces daily." Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating "every day" twice.

Exemplo: Yes, I always ate chocolate when I was a kid because my mom gave me two pieces every day.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas logically using linking words. For example, explain that chocolate has a long history, is associated with romance, and is loved by children, which makes it popular worldwide.

Exemplo: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it has a long history, is often linked to romance, and many children enjoy its sweet taste.

Sugestão: Your answer is short and understandable but could be more natural. Instead of "original 1," say "original flavor" or "classic chocolate." Adding a reason would improve your answer.

Exemplo: My favorite flavor of chocolate is the classic milk chocolate because it has a smooth and creamy taste.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer structure and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar, for example: "Yes, chocolate is a good gift because it symbolizes romance for couples, and children love sweets. Therefore, chocolate is a great gift for everyone."

Exemplo: Yes, I think chocolate makes a great gift because it symbolizes romance for couples, and children enjoy sweet treats. So, it is suitable for many people.

× Yes, I really like eating chocolate because I started eating chocolate since I am one years old.

✓ Yes, I really like eating chocolate because I have been eating chocolate since I was one year old.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'started' with 'since' and mixes present tense 'am' with 'one years old'. The correct form is the present perfect continuous 'have been eating' to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present, and 'was one year old' for past age reference. Also, 'year' should be singular after a number one.

× Yes, I always eat chocolate every day because my mom give me two of them every day.

✓ Yes, I always eat chocolate every day because my mom gives me two of them every day.

The verb 'give' should be in the third person singular present tense 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'my mom'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× Because chocolates have very long stories and is a science of romantic and children like to eat, so that is why it became very very popular in the world.

✓ Because chocolate has a very long history and is a science of romance, and children like to eat it, so that is why it became very popular in the world.

The word 'chocolates' should be singular 'chocolate' when referring to the substance in general. 'Stories' is better as 'history' to fit the context. 'Is' agrees with singular 'science'. 'Romantic' should be 'romance' as a noun. Also, 'children like to eat' needs an object 'it' referring to chocolate. The phrase 'very very' is redundant; one 'very' suffices.

× My favorite flavor of chocolate is probably the original 1.

✓ My favorite flavor of chocolate is probably the original one.

Using the numeral '1' in this context is informal and incorrect. The word 'one' should be used instead to refer to the original flavor.

× Yes, because if it is for couples it is a sign of romantic, but it is if it is for child. You know child like to eat some sweet stuff. So chocolate is a very good, good gift for everyone.

✓ Yes, because if it is for couples, it is a sign of romance, but if it is for a child, you know children like to eat sweet stuff. So chocolate is a very good gift for everyone.

'Romantic' should be the noun 'romance' here. 'Child' should be singular with an article 'a child' or plural 'children'. 'Child like' should be 'children like' to agree in number. The phrase 'very good, good' is redundant; one 'very good' is enough.