Chocolate— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but needs improvement in grammar and sentence structure to sound more natural. Try to avoid repetition and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

Exemplo: Yes, I like eating chocolate because it makes me feel happy. I especially enjoy dark chocolate as it lifts my mood and tastes rich without being too sweet.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using better sentence structure and linking words. Also, try to be more specific about the occasions and explain briefly why you limit your chocolate intake.

Exemplo: I usually eat chocolate only on special occasions like birthdays or festivals because eating it regularly can be harmful to health.

Sugestão: Your answer needs better grammar and verb tense consistency. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, try to provide a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details.

Exemplo: No, I did not eat chocolate often as a child because my parents only allowed me to have it on special occasions.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit vague and could be more specific. Try to explain why chocolate is popular beyond just being a gift, and use linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes delicious and is often given as a gift during special occasions like birthdays and anniversaries, making it a symbol of celebration.

Sugestão: Your answer has good points but needs clearer expression and correct grammar. Avoid making unsupported health claims unless you can explain them properly. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: My favourite flavour is dark chocolate because it is less sweet and has a rich taste. I also find it refreshing and it helps improve my mood.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using clearer sentence structure and linking words. Try to express your opinion more confidently and provide reasons logically.

Exemplo: I think chocolate can be a good gift sometimes, but not always. This is because not everyone likes chocolate or the same flavour, so it's better to choose gifts based on the person's preference.

× Yes, I like eating chocolate whenever I eat I feel so happy.

✓ Yes, I like eating chocolate; whenever I eat it, I feel so happy.

The original sentence lacks proper punctuation and a pronoun before 'I feel so happy'. Adding a semicolon and 'it' clarifies the sentence and improves readability.

× I taste it too much.

✓ I taste it a lot.

The phrase 'too much' is generally used to indicate excessiveness and is not appropriate here. 'A lot' is a better adverbial phrase to express frequency or intensity in this context.

× I love dark chocolate whenever I eat.

✓ I love dark chocolate whenever I eat it.

The verb 'eat' requires an object here. Adding the pronoun 'it' refers back to 'dark chocolate' and completes the sentence correctly.

× It's also give a good mood to me.

✓ It also gives me a good mood.

The subject 'It' requires the verb in third person singular form 'gives'. Also, 'give a good mood to me' is awkward; 'gives me a good mood' is more natural.

× I eat chocolate on special occasions but not every day because I know it's harmful to body whenever we eat chocolate regularly.

✓ I eat chocolate on special occasions but not every day because I know it's harmful to the body if we eat chocolate regularly.

The phrase 'harmful to body' is missing the definite article 'the'. Also, 'whenever' is better replaced with 'if' to express conditionality here.

× No, I don't eat chocolate often when I'm a kid 'cause my parents are not allow me to eat chocolate regularly.

✓ No, I didn't eat chocolate often when I was a kid because my parents did not allow me to eat chocolate regularly.

The sentence refers to past events, so past tense verbs 'didn't eat', 'was', and 'did not allow' should be used instead of present tense forms.

× They give me on special occasion only.

✓ They gave me chocolate only on special occasions.

The verb should be in past tense 'gave' to match the past context. Also, 'on special occasion only' should be 'only on special occasions' for correct preposition and plural form.

× Yes, chocolate is popular around the world because it's like a sweets someone give you in their special days like birthday and anniversary etcetera.

✓ Yes, chocolate is popular around the world because it's like a sweet someone gives you on special days like birthdays and anniversaries, etc.

'Sweets' should be singular 'sweet' here. The verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular 'someone'. 'In their special days' should be 'on special days'. Also, plural forms 'birthdays' and 'anniversaries' are appropriate.

× My favorite flavor of chocolate is a dark chocolate.

✓ My favorite flavor of chocolate is dark chocolate.

When referring to a type or category, the article 'a' is not used before uncountable nouns like 'dark chocolate'.

× It's not too sweet to eat but it's like a good whenever we eat it our blood flow get normal and it's also give a fresh mood.

✓ It's not too sweet to eat, but it's good because whenever we eat it, our blood flow gets normal and it also gives a fresh mood.

The phrase 'it's like a good' is incorrect; 'it's good because' is better. The verb 'get' should be 'gets' to agree with singular subject 'blood flow'. 'It's also give' should be 'it also gives' for subject-verb agreement.

× I think no, it's not good to use chocolate as give to others all time, but sometime it's OK, but not all time, because someone like this, someone don't like this, we don't know which flavor next person want to eat.

✓ I don't think it's good to give chocolate to others all the time, but sometimes it's OK. Not all the time, because some people like it, some don't, and we don't know which flavor the next person wants to eat.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'I think no' should be 'I don't think'. 'Use chocolate as give to others' is incorrect; 'give chocolate to others' is correct. 'All time' should be 'all the time'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Someone like this' should be 'some people like it'. 'Someone don't like this' should be 'some don't'. 'Next person want' should be 'next person wants'.