Chocolate— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "when I whenever" and improve grammar by saying "boosts" instead of "boost". Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy eating chocolate as a snack whenever I feel bored or have spare time because it instantly boosts my mood and makes me feel happier.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammar issues and redundancy. Avoid starting with "Even though" and "but" together. Also, clarify your preference more naturally and use linking words like "however" or "although" to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Although I love chocolate, I don't eat it regularly because I prefer sour and salty tastes over sweet ones. However, I usually eat chocolate once a week or whenever I crave something sweet.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit repetitive and unclear. Try to avoid repeating "used to" too much and clarify your ideas. Use linking words like "because" and "so" to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I used to eat a lot of chocolate as a kid because we had a small shop in our house, so I often took chocolates whenever I had the chance.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words like "because" and "so". Also, avoid incomplete sentences and improve vocabulary usage.

Exemplo: In my opinion, chocolate is popular worldwide because its sweet taste instantly lifts people's moods, as it helps release happy chemicals in the brain.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and can be more concise. Avoid repeating "chocolate flavor" multiple times. Use linking words like "for example" to add supporting details.

Exemplo: My favorite flavor is dark chocolate. For example, I often mix dark chocolate with ice cream, which I really enjoy.

Sugestão: Your answer has some hesitation and repetition. Try to be more confident and concise. Use linking words like "because" and "so" to connect ideas logically. Also, avoid repeating "happy hormones" multiple times.

Exemplo: In my opinion, chocolate is one of the best gifts because people love its sweet taste, and it can make them feel happy by releasing feel-good chemicals.

× Yeah, I'd really love to have a chocolate as a snack when I whenever I feel bored or I feel all I have is spare time, because eating chocolate instantly boost my mood up and make me feel happier than before.

✓ Yeah, I'd really love to have chocolate as a snack whenever I feel bored or when I have spare time, because eating chocolate instantly boosts my mood and makes me feel happier than before.

The word 'chocolate' is uncountable here, so 'a chocolate' is incorrect; it should be just 'chocolate'. Also, 'boost' and 'make' need to be in third person singular form 'boosts' and 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'eating chocolate'. The phrase 'when I whenever I feel bored or I feel all I have is spare time' is redundant and awkward; it is corrected to 'whenever I feel bored or when I have spare time' for clarity and correctness.

× Even though I love eating chocolate but I don't eat chocolate regularly because I don't like the sweetest in comparison to sour and salty taste.

✓ Even though I love eating chocolate, I don't eat it regularly because I don't like sweet tastes compared to sour and salty ones.

Using both 'Even though' and 'but' together is incorrect; only one conjunction is needed. Also, 'the sweetest' is incorrect here; it should be 'sweet tastes'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× But I often eat chocolate once in a week or whenever I feel that I need to eat some sweet.

✓ But I often eat chocolate once a week or whenever I feel that I need to eat something sweet.

'Once in a week' should be 'once a week'. Also, 'some sweet' is incorrect; it should be 'something sweet' to refer to sweet food in general.

× Yeah, I used to eat a lot of chocolate when I was a kid, even though I don't like chocolate or sweetest as much as.

✓ Yeah, I used to eat a lot of chocolate when I was a kid, even though I don't like chocolate or sweets as much now.

The phrase 'sweetest' is incorrect; it should be 'sweets' (plural noun). Also, the sentence is incomplete and awkward; adding 'now' clarifies the contrast between past and present preferences.

× But I used to eat chocolate a lot because as far as I remember, we used to have a small shop in our own house and I used to pick up a chocolate and eat whenever I got chance to eat.

✓ But I used to eat chocolate a lot because, as far as I remember, we had a small shop in our house, and I used to pick up chocolate and eat it whenever I got the chance.

The sentence is long and lacks proper punctuation. 'Pick up a chocolate' is incorrect; 'pick up chocolate' is better as chocolate is uncountable here. Also, 'whenever I got chance to eat' should be 'whenever I got the chance' for grammatical correctness.

× Well, in my opinion this sweet taste of chocolate and the fact that we ever eat chocolate they are mood instantly got lifted off.

✓ Well, in my opinion, the sweet taste of chocolate and the fact that we eat chocolate instantly lift our mood.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'They are mood instantly got lifted off' is incorrect. The corrected sentence uses proper subject-verb agreement and clearer structure.

× So people like chocolate all all around the world and I know the reason is that chocolate help to release happy.

✓ So people like chocolate all around the world, and I know the reason is that chocolate helps to release happiness.

'Chocolate help' should be 'chocolate helps' to agree with singular subject. 'Happy' is an adjective; the noun 'happiness' is needed here.

× As far as I remember, the favorite flavor of chocolate that I enjoy a lot is chocolate flavor, which is dark chocolate.

✓ As far as I remember, my favorite chocolate flavor is dark chocolate.

The phrase 'the favorite flavor of chocolate that I enjoy a lot is chocolate flavor' is redundant and awkward. Simplifying to 'my favorite chocolate flavor is dark chocolate' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I I used to mix chocolate flavor in ice cream and eat a lot, so chocolate flavor is my favorite.

✓ I used to mix chocolate flavor into ice cream and eat a lot, so chocolate flavor is my favorite.

The phrase 'mix chocolate flavor in ice cream' should be 'mix chocolate flavor into ice cream' to use the correct preposition. Also, the repeated 'I' is removed.

× On my point of view, chocolate is considered as one of the, uh, one of the best gift to give other because people love chocolate because of its sweet taste.

✓ From my point of view, chocolate is considered one of the best gifts to give others because people love chocolate for its sweet taste.

'On my point of view' should be 'From my point of view'. 'One of the best gift' should be 'one of the best gifts' (plural). 'Give other' should be 'give others'. 'Because of its sweet taste' is better as 'for its sweet taste' here.

× And whenever we give chocolate to others, they feel happy because it contains happy hormones, happy chemicals which release happy hormones.

✓ And whenever we give chocolate to others, they feel happy because it contains chemicals that release happy hormones.

The phrase 'happy hormones, happy chemicals which release happy hormones' is repetitive and awkward. Simplifying to 'chemicals that release happy hormones' improves clarity and correctness.