Chocolate— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lặp lại ý và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, mạch lạc. Hãy giải thích rõ hơn về sở thích của bạn với chocolate và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "things that have the taste of bitter".

Exemplo: I don't really like eating chocolate because I find it a bit bitter. Although some chocolates are sweet, the bitter taste puts me off.

Sugestão: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Cụm từ "once in the balloon" không đúng ngữ cảnh. Hãy nói rõ tần suất ăn chocolate và lý do một cách mạch lạc.

Exemplo: I eat chocolate very rarely, maybe once every few months, because I prefer other snacks.

Sugestão: Bạn nên dùng thì quá khứ đúng cách và câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "I'm trying to eat that" và "I'm not fall in love with that much". Hãy nói rõ thói quen ăn chocolate khi còn nhỏ và thay đổi sở thích khi lớn lên.

Exemplo: Yes, I used to eat chocolate often when I was a kid because it was a popular snack. However, as I grew older, I lost interest in it.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy trình bày hai lý do một cách mạch lạc và dùng liên từ để kết nối ý.

Exemplo: I think chocolate is popular because it is affordable and widely advertised on TV, which makes many children love it.

Sugestão: Bạn nên dùng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn. Hãy giải thích lý do bạn thích vị chocolate trắng một cách tự nhiên và mạch lạc.

Exemplo: My favourite flavour is white chocolate because it is sweet and not bitter. I especially enjoy it when it is used as decoration on cakes.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt rõ ràng. Tránh dùng những cụm từ không phù hợp như "You sound great" hay "except for me". Hãy trình bày ý kiến của bạn một cách mạch lạc và tự nhiên.

Exemplo: I think chocolate is a good gift because it is popular and most people like it. It is also affordable, which makes it suitable for many occasions.

× Actually I'm not really into chocolate because I hate the things that have the taste of bitter, so I think chocolates have this too, so I don't really love it.

✓ Actually, I'm not really into chocolate because I hate things that taste bitter, so I think chocolates have this too, so I don't really love it.

The phrase 'the taste of bitter' is incorrect; 'bitter' is an adjective and should be used as 'taste bitter' without 'the' or 'of'. Also, 'the things that have the taste of bitter' is awkward; better to say 'things that taste bitter'.

× I would say it is once in the balloon. I'm not actually really love this kind of food so that's why when I have an opportunity to to have snack or something, I would choose another one.

✓ I would say it is once in a blue moon. I'm not really fond of this kind of food, so that's why when I have an opportunity to have a snack or something, I would choose another one.

The phrase 'once in the balloon' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'once in a blue moon'. Also, 'I'm not actually really love' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm not really fond of' or 'I don't really love'. 'To to have snack' has a repeated 'to' and missing article before 'snack'.

× Yes, of course. When I was young, I think that chocolate is a snack of everyone, so I'm trying to eat that. But after I become older, I think that is not suitable for me and I'm not fall in love with that much.

✓ Yes, of course. When I was young, I thought that chocolate was a snack for everyone, so I tried to eat it. But after I became older, I thought that it was not suitable for me and I didn't fall in love with it much.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. Since the time is in the past ('when I was young'), verbs should be in past tense: 'think' to 'thought', 'is' to 'was', 'I'm trying' to 'I tried', 'become' to 'became', 'think' to 'thought', 'I'm not fall in love' to 'I didn't fall in love'.

× I think it is has two reasons of this popular UMM first of all is the this kind of food is not really expensive and moreover umm you can see everyone in the TV are it took a lesson that why every kids love it.

✓ I think it has two reasons for this popularity. First of all, this kind of food is not really expensive, and moreover, you can see everyone on TV; it took a lesson on why every kid loves it.

The sentence has pronoun misuse and awkward phrasing. 'It is has' is incorrect; should be 'it has'. 'Reasons of this popular' should be 'reasons for this popularity'. 'Everyone in the TV are it took a lesson' is unclear; corrected to 'everyone on TV; it took a lesson'. 'Every kids' should be 'every kid' because 'every' is singular.

× I think I'm addicted to white chocolate because it's not half the bitter, the things that I don't want and it's also have the taste of chocolate, so that's why I love that, especially when it's decoration in the cake.

✓ I think I'm addicted to white chocolate because it's not half as bitter, which is something I don't want, and it also has the taste of chocolate, so that's why I love it, especially when it's used as decoration on the cake.

'Not half the bitter' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'not half as bitter'. 'It's also have' should be 'it also has'. 'When it's decoration in the cake' should be 'when it's used as decoration on the cake'.

× You sound great, umm Kate Lovis and chocolate is really famous and I think that's except for me. Everyone will love it. So it is a really suitable gift to others when you are out of money.

✓ You sound great. Umm, I love chocolate and it is really famous, and I think that's true for me. Everyone will love it. So it is a really suitable gift for others when you are out of money.

'Kate Lovis' seems to be a mishearing or typo; corrected to 'I love'. 'That's except for me' is incorrect; should be 'that's true for me'. 'Gift to others' is better as 'gift for others'.