Chocolate— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "I love to eat chocolate a lot" and "it was very tasteful for me." Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy eating chocolate because it makes me feel happy and satisfied. Whenever I have a craving for something sweet, I usually choose chocolate as my go-to treat.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammar issues and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct tenses and clearer expressions. Use linking words like "for example" or "also" to organize your ideas better. Keep your sentences concise and relevant.

Exemplo: I eat chocolate quite often, depending on my mood. For example, I usually have some chocolate when I return home from work or college. Also, I eat it to refresh my mood when I feel tired.

Sugestão: Your answer has tense errors and unclear expressions. Use past tense when talking about childhood. Avoid vague phrases like "a lot of craving in my heart." Be more specific and concise, and use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: When I was a kid, I didn't eat chocolate very often because my parents limited it. However, now I crave chocolate more and often buy it whenever I go out.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use singular/plural forms correctly and improve sentence structure. Provide clearer reasons and examples. Use linking words like "because" and "for example" to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it comes in many flavors, like vanilla and dark chocolate. People enjoy it because it helps them relax and refresh their minds after a busy day.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammar errors. Try to express your favourite flavour clearly and explain reasons logically. Avoid repetition and use linking words like "because" and "maybe" to clarify your thoughts.

Exemplo: My favourite flavours are double chocolate and milk chocolate because I find them very tasty. Maybe I enjoy them more now because they help me relieve stress from my busy schedule.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and has many grammar mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly and directly. Use linking words like "however" or "sometimes" to organize your ideas. Avoid vague phrases and be specific.

Exemplo: I think giving chocolate as a gift depends on the person. Some people appreciate useful gifts, while others prefer gifts that have sentimental value. So, it really depends on the recipient's preferences.

× I love to eat chocolate a lot because when I eat chocolate I feel very happy and it was very tasteful for me.

✓ I love to eat chocolate a lot because when I eat chocolate I feel very happy and it is very tasty for me.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. 'Was' should be 'is' to maintain present tense consistency. Also, 'tasteful' is incorrect here; 'tasty' is the correct adjective to describe food flavour.

× And when I have any type of craving, I mostly prefer to eat chocolate in my life.

✓ And when I have any type of craving, I mostly prefer to eat chocolate in my life.

The phrase 'in my life' is unnecessary and awkward here. It is better to omit it for clarity and naturalness.

× Sometimes I mostly eat the chocolate when I was returning home from my work or from my college and sometime I have a craving to eat something sugar at that time.

✓ Sometimes I mostly eat chocolate when I am returning home from my work or from my college and sometimes I have a craving to eat something sugary at that time.

The phrase 'when I was returning' should be present continuous 'when I am returning' to match habitual action. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' for frequency. 'Something sugar' is incorrect; 'something sugary' is the correct adjective form.

× Honestly speaking, at that time I have a limit of eating chocolate, but now I have a lot of craving in my heart to eat chocolate whenever I'm going outside to eat something and when I see chocolate I prefer to buy and eat immediately.

✓ Honestly speaking, at that time I had a limit on eating chocolate, but now I have a strong craving to eat chocolate whenever I'm going outside to eat something and when I see chocolate I prefer to buy and eat it immediately.

'I have a limit' should be past tense 'I had a limit' to match 'at that time'. 'A lot of craving' is incorrect; 'a strong craving' is better. Added 'it' after 'eat' for clarity.

× Well, according to me, chocolate is very popular in the world. They are very different type of flavors people like to eat such as vanilla, dark chocolate and many more because they think that when we eat they feel relaxed from the hectic schedule and refresh their mind.

✓ Well, according to me, chocolate is very popular in the world. There are many different types of flavors people like to eat such as vanilla, dark chocolate and many more because they think that when they eat it, they feel relaxed from the hectic schedule and their mind is refreshed.

'They are very different type' is incorrect; should be 'There are many different types'. 'When we eat they feel' is unclear; changed to 'when they eat it, they feel'. Added 'their mind is refreshed' for grammatical correctness.

× I mostly prefer to eat the double chocolate or milk chocolate because I like to eat a chocolate nowadays a lot.

✓ I mostly prefer to eat double chocolate or milk chocolate because I like to eat chocolate a lot nowadays.

'The double chocolate' is incorrect; no article needed. 'A chocolate' is incorrect; 'chocolate' is uncountable here. Word order adjusted for naturalness.

× But I do not know what's the reason behind this. But I think tired should the hectic schedule or I want to to leave from the some stress in my life.

✓ But I do not know the reason behind this. I think it is because of the hectic schedule or I want to get away from some stress in my life.

Sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Tired should the hectic schedule' is incorrect; corrected to 'it is because of the hectic schedule'. Removed duplicate 'to'. 'Leave from the some stress' corrected to 'get away from some stress'.

× MMM it depends upon the people to people because some people think that we have to give gift to another people, which is very useful.

✓ MMM it depends on the people because some people think that we have to give gifts to other people, which are very useful.

'Depends upon' is less common; 'depends on' is preferred. 'People to people' is incorrect; simplified to 'people'. 'Give gift to another people' corrected to 'give gifts to other people'. 'Which is' changed to 'which are' to agree with plural 'gifts'.

× Sometime some people give a gift such as they put as a memorable.

✓ Sometimes some people give a gift as a keepsake.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes'. 'They put as a memorable' is incorrect and unclear; replaced with 'as a keepsake' to convey intended meaning.

× So it depends on the people to people, how they behave with them.

✓ So it depends on the people, how they behave towards them.

'People to people' is incorrect; simplified to 'people'. 'Behave with' is incorrect; 'behave towards' is correct preposition.