Part 1
Examinador
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
Candidato
Yes, I do like eating chocolate because I like it. Sweet food. And I think it will makes me feel happy.
Examinador
How often do you eat chocolate?
Candidato
Maybe once a week or even more. Every time I, when I felt upset, I will eat chocolate.
Examinador
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
Candidato
Actually, I don't really often eat chocolate when I won it because my parents thought it was harmful to my teeth and. I don't really like wash my teeth when I was little or so. My parents don't allow me.
Examinador
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
Candidato
I think. The reason why chocolate is popular around the world is that. It can brings people happiness. When people eat chocolate, they will feel happy.
Examinador
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
Candidato
Actually, I like the white chocolate the most because I think it's the most sweet. Test in the sauce of chocolate.
Examinador
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
Candidato
Yes, I do think it's a good gift. Because. Chocolate can. Makes people feel happy. It's just. It's not just. A gift. For people who you love in. But.
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答时应避免重复表达“喜欢”,并且句子应更连贯自然。可以用更丰富的词汇描述喜欢巧克力的原因。
Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy eating chocolate because it tastes sweet and delicious. Moreover, it often lifts my mood and makes me feel happy.
How often do you eat chocolate?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答时应注意语法正确,避免断句不完整。可以用连接词使句子更流畅。
Exemplo: I usually eat chocolate about once a week, but sometimes I eat it more often, especially when I feel upset because it cheers me up.
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答应更清晰连贯,避免语法错误和断句。应直接回答问题并提供具体原因。
Exemplo: Actually, I didn't eat chocolate often as a child because my parents believed it was bad for my teeth and they didn't allow me to eat it frequently.
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答应避免重复,句子应更流畅自然。可以用更多细节解释巧克力受欢迎的原因。
Exemplo: I believe chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes great and can boost people's mood, making them feel happy and satisfied.
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答应避免语法错误和不完整的句子。应清楚表达喜欢的口味及原因。
Exemplo: My favourite flavour is white chocolate because it is the sweetest and has a creamy texture that I really enjoy.
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答应更连贯,避免断句和语法错误。应完整表达观点并给出理由。
Exemplo: Yes, I think chocolate is a great gift because it can make people happy. It's suitable not only for loved ones but also for friends and colleagues.
× Yes, I do like eating chocolate because I like it. Sweet food.
✓ Yes, I do like eating chocolate because I like sweet food.
这里的'Sweet food'是一个不完整的句子,应该作为形容词短语修饰前面的内容,合并成'like sweet food'。
× And I think it will makes me feel happy.
✓ And I think it will make me feel happy.
助动词'will'后面动词应为原形,不能加's'。
× Every time I, when I felt upset, I will eat chocolate.
✓ Every time I feel upset, I eat chocolate.
描述习惯动作时应使用一般现在时,'felt'应改为'feel','will eat'改为'eat'。
× Actually, I don't really often eat chocolate when I won it because my parents thought it was harmful to my teeth and.
✓ Actually, I didn't really often eat chocolate when I won it because my parents thought it was harmful to my teeth.
描述过去习惯应使用一般过去时,'don't'应改为'didn't'。
× I don't really like wash my teeth when I was little or so.
✓ I didn't really like to wash my teeth when I was little.
描述过去的喜好应使用过去时,'don't'改为'didn't','like wash'应改为'like to wash'。
× My parents don't allow me.
✓ My parents didn't allow me.
描述过去的情况应使用过去时,'don't'改为'didn't'。
× It can brings people happiness.
✓ It can bring people happiness.
情态动词'can'后面动词应为原形,不能加's'。
× Actually, I like the white chocolate the most because I think it's the most sweet.
✓ Actually, I like white chocolate the most because I think it's the sweetest.
最高级形容词应使用'-est'形式,'most sweet'应改为'sweetest'。
× Test in the sauce of chocolate.
✓ The taste in the sauce of chocolate.
原句结构不完整,缺少主语和谓语,改为完整表达。
× Because. Chocolate can. Makes people feel happy.
✓ Because chocolate can make people feel happy.
情态动词'can'后面动词应为原形,不能加's'。
× It's just. It's not just. A gift. For people who you love in. But.
✓ It's not just a gift for people you love.
原句断句不当,语序混乱,需调整为完整通顺的句子。