Chocolate— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy such as repeating 'eating food or some snacks like chocolate' and focus on a direct response with supporting details. Also, be careful with factual accuracy; chocolate is tasty but not particularly enriched with nutrients. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy eating chocolate because it helps me relax and lifts my mood when I'm feeling down. Additionally, its rich taste makes it a comforting treat.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and wordy. Try to give a direct answer first, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'raw idea' and 'all the time' which reduce clarity. Also, keep sentences concise and natural.

Exemplo: I usually eat chocolate on weekends, especially when I watch movies or series, as I like to have it as a snack during those times.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your response clearly: state whether you ate chocolate as a child, explain why, and give a specific example. Use linking words to connect ideas and check verb tenses and word forms for accuracy.

Exemplo: No, I didn't often eat chocolate as a child because I didn't like the taste. In fact, the first time I tried chocolate was a hazelnut flavour, which changed my opinion about it.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and adding linking words for coherence. Also, avoid repeating similar words like 'snack' twice. Try to include more specific reasons or examples to enrich your answer.

Exemplo: Chocolate is popular worldwide because of effective advertising, social media marketing, and celebrity endorsements, which all help to increase its appeal.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence and then add supporting details. Avoid awkward phrasing like 'the best option for me' and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: My favourite flavour is chocolate combined with hazelnuts, wafers, and Oreo, as I find this mix delicious and satisfying.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and incomplete, with grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to give a clear opinion first, then explain with specific reasons using linking words. Avoid vague expressions and finish your thoughts fully.

Exemplo: I think chocolate makes a good gift because it brings happiness and creates sweet memories. However, some people might avoid it due to its high sugar and carbohydrate content.

× Actually I ate chocolate for the first time and that was a Hazlett flavor and that just demolish the perception of chocolate in my mind that why I do.

✓ Actually I ate chocolate for the first time and that was a Hazlett flavor and that just demolished the perception of chocolate in my mind, which is why I do.

The verb 'demolish' should be in the past tense 'demolished' to agree with the past action 'ate'. Also, the phrase 'that why I do' is unclear and corrected to 'which is why I do' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Chocolate is one of the most powerful snack and famous snack in the world because of its advertisement, social media marketing and the celebrity endorsement in the ads which makes it more popular.

✓ Chocolate is one of the most powerful snacks and famous snacks in the world because of its advertisement, social media marketing and the celebrity endorsements in the ads which make it more popular.

The nouns 'snack' and 'endorsement' should be plural ('snacks', 'endorsements') to agree with 'one of the most' which refers to multiple items. Also, the verb 'makes' should be 'make' to agree with the plural subject 'advertisement, social media marketing and the celebrity endorsements'.

× I do not remember the exact days when I ate chocolate but I can give you a raw idea that on weekends and whenever I go to see movie or some series, I usually take snacks which includes chocolate all the time.

✓ I do not remember the exact days when I ate chocolate but I can give you a rough idea that on weekends and whenever I go to see a movie or some series, I usually take snacks which include chocolate all the time.

The phrase 'raw idea' is incorrect; it should be 'rough idea'. Also, 'go to see movie' needs the article 'a' before 'movie'. The verb 'includes' should be 'include' to agree with the plural subject 'snacks'.

× There could be different perceptions of giving chocolate to the others as a gift as it spreads hapiness and remarques some sweet moments.

✓ There could be different perceptions of giving chocolate to others as a gift as it spreads happiness and marks some sweet moments.

The phrase 'to the others' is incorrect; it should be 'to others' without 'the'. The word 'hapiness' is misspelled and corrected to 'happiness'. The word 'remarques' is incorrect and replaced with 'marks' to convey the intended meaning.