Chocolate— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by using correct grammar and sentence structure. Avoid unnecessary words and focus on directly answering the question with simple, clear sentences.

Exemplo: I don't eat chocolate very often, but sometimes I enjoy it when I feel happy. It depends on my mood.

Sugestão: Use proper sentence structure and linking words to connect your ideas. Also, try to avoid repeating phrases and be more specific about frequency.

Exemplo: I eat chocolate occasionally, especially when I am happy or celebrating something, because it makes the moment sweeter.

Sugestão: Focus on answering the question directly and clearly. Use simple sentences and correct grammar. Avoid unnecessary words and try to complete your thoughts.

Exemplo: I don't remember clearly, but I think I ate chocolate often as a kid because my father sent us a lot of chocolate from abroad.

Sugestão: Try to express your ideas clearly and logically. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid unclear or incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it is sweet and delicious. Also, it is available in many countries, so many people enjoy it.

Sugestão: Make your answer more concise and clear by using correct grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your reasons.

Exemplo: My favourite chocolate flavour is strawberry because strawberry is my favourite fruit. I like the taste and smell, so I usually choose strawberry-flavoured chocolate.

Sugestão: Try to give a clear and direct answer with supporting reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift because it is often given to celebrate special occasions and it makes the moment sweeter.

× Will I'm not a chocolate shake?

✓ Well, I'm not a chocolate shake.

The word 'Will' is incorrectly used here instead of 'Well' as an interjection. 'Will' is a modal verb used to express future tense or willingness, which is not appropriate in this context. Use 'Well' to start a sentence when hesitating or thinking.

× But sometime I eat chocolate.

✓ But sometimes I eat chocolate.

The word 'sometime' is an adverb meaning 'at some unspecified time', but here the plural form 'sometimes' is needed to indicate frequency. Use 'sometimes' to express 'occasionally'.

× Because it's depend on my mood.

✓ Because it depends on my mood.

The sentence starts with 'Because' which is a subordinating conjunction and should be connected to a main clause. Also, 'depend' should be 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. The corrected sentence is a dependent clause and should be connected properly or rephrased.

× When I am happy, quite happy on something, that time I eat chocolate.

✓ When I am happy, quite happy about something, I eat chocolate at that time.

The phrase 'quite happy on something' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'about'. Also, 'that time I eat chocolate' is awkward; it is better to say 'I eat chocolate at that time' to indicate the time clearly.

× Will as I said before is depends on my mood when I am quite happy or celeb to celebrate something that time I chocolate it's makes the moment sweeter and grid.

✓ Well, as I said before, it depends on my mood. When I am quite happy or celebrating something, at that time I eat chocolate; it makes the moment sweeter and great.

'Will' is incorrectly used instead of 'Well'. 'Is depends' is incorrect; 'depends' alone is correct. 'Celeb' is an informal abbreviation and should be 'celebrating'. 'I chocolate' is missing a verb; it should be 'I eat chocolate'. 'Grid' is likely a typo for 'great'. The sentence is fragmented and needs proper punctuation and structure.

× Will this shirt? Tough question that I'd I didn't really remember that when I was kid I used to be chocolate or not, but I think I eat chocolate when I was kid because my father was in abroad he sent a lot of chocolate where it is and we.

✓ Well, this is a tough question. I don't really remember if I used to eat chocolate when I was a kid, but I think I did because my father was abroad and he sent a lot of chocolate where we were.

'Will' should be 'Well'. 'I'd' is unclear and unnecessary. 'I used to be chocolate' is incorrect; it should be 'I used to eat chocolate'. 'When I was kid' needs an article: 'when I was a kid'. 'Was in abroad' should be 'was abroad'. The sentence is incomplete and needs proper structure.

× Chocolate is popular and orby 'cause it's.

✓ Chocolate is popular and worldwide because it is...

The word 'orby' is likely a misspelling of 'worldwide'. Also, 'cause' is informal for 'because'. The sentence is incomplete and needs to be finished properly.

× Sweet and as when some opposition that there was every people used to eat chocolate.

✓ It is sweet, and in some cultures, many people used to eat chocolate.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Opposition' is incorrect; likely meant 'populations' or 'cultures'. 'Every people' is incorrect; 'many people' or 'everyone' is correct. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity.

× But if you can get everywhere in the world, let's say it's popping.

✓ Because you can get it everywhere in the world, let's say it's popular.

'If you can get everywhere' is incorrect; it should be 'you can get it everywhere'. 'Popping' is informal and unclear; 'popular' is more appropriate here.

× Well I love a strawberry flavor and I most of the time I eat strawberry type chocolate and it's but becauses story is my favorite fruit and I love that flavor and smell That's why most of the time when I eat chocolate I tried to eat strawberry flavoured chocolate.

✓ Well, I love strawberry flavor, and most of the time I eat strawberry-flavored chocolate because strawberry is my favorite fruit and I love its flavor and smell. That's why most of the time when I eat chocolate, I try to eat strawberry-flavored chocolate.

'A strawberry flavor' should be 'strawberry flavor' without 'a'. 'It's but becauses story' is incorrect and unclear; corrected to 'because strawberry'. 'Tried' should be 'try' to match present tense. The sentence is long and needs punctuation for clarity.

× Yes, uh, to give others a chocolate, it's quite good because when we give someone something that would because we need to celebrate something with others.

✓ Yes, giving chocolate to others is quite good because when we give someone something, it is usually to celebrate something with them.

'To give others a chocolate' is awkward; 'giving chocolate to others' is better. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; 'that would because' is incorrect. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity.

× That's why we give some chocolate to, to make the moment grid.

✓ That's why we give some chocolate to make the moment great.

The phrase 'to, to make' has an unnecessary comma and repetition. 'Grid' is likely a typo for 'great'. The sentence should be concise and clear.