Chocolate— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Try to give a clear opinion and a reason why you like or dislike chocolate, using simple and correct sentences.

Exemplo: No, I don't like eating chocolate because I find it too sweet for my taste.

Sugestão: Your answer is very short and unclear. Provide a direct response about the frequency and use correct vocabulary and grammar.

Exemplo: I rarely eat chocolate, maybe once or twice a month.

Sugestão: Your answer is repetitive and has grammatical errors. Give a clear and concise answer with correct tense.

Exemplo: No, I didn't eat chocolate often when I was a kid, and I still don't eat it now.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and does not explain why chocolate is popular. Try to give reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: Chocolate is popular because it tastes sweet and makes people feel happy.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains errors. Try to directly answer the question and explain your preference or lack of it.

Exemplo: I don't have a favourite flavour because I don't like chocolate.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and does not address the question. Try to give a clear opinion and reason about giving chocolate as gifts.

Exemplo: Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift because many people enjoy it and it is easy to share.

× I don't like eating so clear when I was a child.

✓ I didn't like eating chocolate when I was a child.

The original sentence is unclear and lacks proper structure. The phrase 'so clear' is incorrect here. The sentence should be in the past tense to match 'when I was a child', and specify what was not liked, which is 'eating chocolate'.

× I saved you collect look like.

✓ I saved you collect look like.

This sentence is incoherent and does not form a meaningful statement. It is not possible to correct it without additional context.

× I never eat hot net.

✓ I never eat chocolate.

The phrase 'hot net' is incorrect and does not make sense in this context. The student likely meant 'chocolate'. The sentence is in present tense and is correct otherwise.

× No, no, no, I don't eat chocolate when I was a kid and now.

✓ No, no, no, I didn't eat chocolate when I was a kid and I don't eat it now.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't eat' with past time 'when I was a kid'. The past tense 'didn't eat' should be used for the past time reference. Also, to express the current habit, 'I don't eat it now' is clearer.

× He called the chocolate is of chief and then some teachers are like this.

✓ Chocolate is popular because it tastes good and some people like it.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. It seems to attempt to explain why chocolate is popular. A clearer, grammatically correct sentence is provided.

× Actually, I don't know about something chocolate because I don't like chocolate when I was chair.

✓ Actually, I don't know much about chocolate because I didn't like chocolate when I was a child.

The phrase 'when I was chair' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was a child'. Also, the past tense 'didn't like' is needed to match the past time reference.

× Chess I think it be culture classes like science now and it is it to eat it is chocolate may be worth.

✓ I think chocolate is part of culture now and it is worth eating.

The original sentence is incoherent and grammatically incorrect. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence conveying the intended meaning.