Chocolate— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答不够连贯，语法和表达有误，建议简洁明了地表达喜欢巧克力的原因，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I like eating chocolate because it helps me relieve stress and focus, especially before exams.

Sugestão: 回答不够清晰，表达混乱，建议直接回答频率并用连接词说明原因。

Exemplo: I usually eat chocolate once a month, especially before I take exams at university.

Sugestão: 表达不流畅且含糊，建议用完整句子说明童年时喜欢巧克力的原因，并避免语法错误。

Exemplo: Yes, I often ate chocolate as a kid because it is sweet and delicious. I think most children like it.

Sugestão: 表达不够准确，建议用更清晰的句子说明巧克力受欢迎的原因，并注意词汇使用。

Exemplo: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes delicious, is sweet, and is affordable for most people.

Sugestão: 回答含糊且语法错误较多，建议简洁表达喜欢牛奶巧克力的原因。

Exemplo: My favourite flavour is milk chocolate because it tastes smooth and is not too bitter.

Sugestão: 表达不清晰且有语法错误，建议明确表达巧克力作为礼物的优点，并使用连贯句子。

Exemplo: Yes, chocolate makes a good gift because it is delicious and most people enjoy receiving it.

× I'm now eating a chocolate it's a good way to really you my stress and make me focus on the.

✓ I'm now eating chocolate; it's a good way to relieve my stress and help me focus on the test.

句中使用了错误的动词形式“really you”，应为“relieve”表示“缓解”，且“a chocolate”应去掉冠词，因这里指的是巧克力这种物质。

× I like it chocolate. 'Cause especially before I will go to the time.

✓ I like chocolate, especially before I go to the exam.

“will go”在此处不合适，表示习惯动作时应使用一般现在时“go”。

× As I mentioned, I eat chocolate before I will go to the exam.

✓ As I mentioned, I eat chocolate before I go to the exam.

同上，表示习惯动作，使用一般现在时“go”而非将来时“will go”。

× In my university. I will go to take time. I remove.

✓ At my university, I will take the exam.

原句结构混乱，缺少主谓宾，且“take time”应为“take the exam”，“I remove”无意义，应删除。

× So I eat chocolate every month. Once.

✓ So I eat chocolate once every month.

“once”应放在频率副词位置，且“every month once”顺序错误。

× Yes, when I was kid I. Like it? Will it be 'cause the chocolate is very sweet and very delivers?

✓ Yes, when I was a kid, I liked it because chocolate is very sweet and delicious.

“kid”前应加不定冠词“a”，“like”应为过去式“liked”，且“delivers”应为形容词“delicious”。

× I like it? Will it be 'cause the chocolate is very sweet and very delivers?

✓ I liked it because chocolate is very sweet and delicious.

“Will it be”用法错误，且“it?”多余，应直接表达原因。

× Uhm, no of Kidwell disliked it.

✓ Uhm, no kid would dislike it.

“no of Kidwell”错误，应为“no kid would”，表示否定的习惯用法。

× I guess that's just what it is. Is not only delicious and sweet, but also his prize A.

✓ I guess that's just how it is. It's not only delicious and sweet, but also affordable.

“Is not”缺少主语，应为“It is not”，“his prize A”表达不清，应改为“affordable”表示“价格合理”。

× It's normal and most people can afford it.

✓ It's common and most people can afford it.

“normal”用词不当，描述普遍性应使用“common”。

× I like milk chocolate. Be 'cause although I like chocolate, but the doctor needed to better.

✓ I like milk chocolate because although I like chocolate, dark chocolate is better.

“Be 'cause”应为“because”，且“the doctor needed to better”应为“dark chocolate is better”。

× I like milk chocolate. Be 'cause although I like chocolate, but the doctor needed to better.

✓ I like milk chocolate because although I like chocolate, dark chocolate is better.

“because”与“but”不能同时使用，应选择其一。

× And it is hard to attract me so. The Milk 28 is a good choice.

✓ And it is hard to attract me, so milk chocolate is a good choice.

“The Milk 28”无意义，应为“milk chocolate”。

× Yes, I think toilet is a good good gifts to others.

✓ Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift to give to others.

“toilet”错误，应为“chocolate”，且“gifts”应为单数“gift”。

× Becauses compare with useless gift.

✓ Because compared with useless gifts,

“Becauses”拼写错误，应为“Because”，且句子不完整，应补充完整。

× To check dates can be heated and very delicious.

✓ Chocolate can be heated and is very delicious.

“To check dates”错误，应为“Chocolate”。

× Most most of people will enjoy it.

✓ Most people will enjoy it.

“Most most of people”重复，应为“Most people”。