Chocolate— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Try to avoid repetition and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you like chocolate with specific reasons.

Exemplo: Yes, I really like eating chocolate because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. For instance, I often eat chocolate after dinner to satisfy my sweet tooth. Also, if I don't have chocolate before going to bed, I feel a bit stressed.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many repetitions. Try to give a direct answer first, then add supporting details using linking words. Keep your sentences simple and grammatically correct.

Exemplo: I eat chocolate every day because I really enjoy it. In fact, I cannot go a single day without having some chocolate.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Please answer the question directly and provide clear supporting details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: When I was a kid, I didn't eat chocolate very often because I preferred other sweets like candies and ice cream.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but is hard to understand due to grammar and unclear expressions. Try to organize your answer with linking words and clearer sentences.

Exemplo: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it has a unique and delicious taste. Most people enjoy it, although some cannot eat it due to allergies or because they find it too sweet.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Please state your favourite flavour clearly and explain why you like it using specific details and linking words.

Exemplo: My favourite flavour of chocolate is dark chocolate. When I first tasted it, I really liked its rich and slightly bitter taste. Although it is expensive, I think it is worth trying.

Sugestão: Your answer has good points but is repetitive and lacks clear structure. Try to organize your ideas with linking words and avoid repeating the same words.

Exemplo: I think giving chocolate as a gift is a great idea because most people like it. Moreover, chocolates come in many shapes and flavours, so you can choose something unique for each person.

× Yes, I think the chocolate is my big biggest obsession because I cannot live without chocolate.

✓ Yes, I think chocolate is my biggest obsession because I cannot live without chocolate.

The phrase 'big biggest' is incorrect because 'biggest' is already the superlative form of 'big'. Using both together is redundant. Use only 'biggest' to express the highest degree.

× Every Monday cannot go without this sweet.

✓ Every Monday, I cannot go without this sweet.

The original sentence lacks a subject, making it incomplete. Adding 'I' clarifies who cannot go without the sweet, improving sentence structure.

× So every day if I'm going go to sleep and there are no chocolate I will be stressed or want eat something but else I did a big dinner.

✓ So every day, if I'm going to sleep and there is no chocolate, I will be stressed or want to eat something else, but I already had a big dinner.

The sentence has multiple issues: missing 'to' in 'going to go', incorrect 'are' instead of 'is' for singular 'chocolate', missing 'to' before 'eat', and awkward phrasing. Correcting these improves clarity and grammar.

× How is it before I eat chocolate every day? Because no, no, no, one day cannot go without chocolate.

✓ It used to be that I ate chocolate every day because I cannot go one day without chocolate.

The original sentence is unclear and uses incorrect pronouns and structure. Rephrasing clarifies the meaning and corrects pronoun use.

× And so I can say that it's often. Open definitely everyday.

✓ So I can say that I eat it often, definitely every day.

The original sentence misuses 'it's' and 'open'. Replacing with 'I eat it' and correcting 'everyday' to 'every day' improves grammar and clarity.

× Whatever, kids. I didn't eat chocolate often because I preferred more. Some marvelous. Like, yes.

✓ When I was a kid, I didn't eat chocolate often because I preferred other marvelous things, like sweets.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Rephrasing with correct pronouns and complete sentences improves understanding.

× I I think that chocolate is popular around the world because it has a special taste and everyone like it's big and small percent of people have the allergy or don't like it because it's really sweet and there have obsession for it because of their most often seeing sweet.

✓ I think that chocolate is popular around the world because it has a special taste and everyone likes it. A small percentage of people have allergies or don't like it because it's really sweet, but many have an obsession with it because they often see sweets.

The sentence has multiple pronoun and verb agreement errors. Correcting 'everyone like' to 'everyone likes', fixing 'it's big and small percent' to 'a small percentage', and clarifying pronouns improves grammar and meaning.

× My favorite flavor of chocolate. I would say that if they do buy chocolate because I don't know when I when I taste it for first it was the best chocolate flower when I have ever eaten. I don't know it has their special taste and it cost a lot of money is so doroga.

✓ My favorite flavor of chocolate? I would say the one I first tasted because it was the best chocolate flavor I have ever eaten. I don't know, it has a special taste and it costs a lot of money; it is very expensive.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect pronouns and words ('flower' instead of 'flavor', 'their' instead of 'its'). Correcting these and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammar.

× I think to use chocolate, chocolate as a gift is really good idea because everyone likes chocolate and it will be good for everyone because they like it and have it have a lot of figures that can be cute or cool.

✓ I think using chocolate as a gift is a really good idea because everyone likes chocolate, and it will be good for everyone since they like it and there are many figures that can be cute or cool.

The sentence has pronoun and article errors. Changing 'to use' to 'using', removing repeated 'chocolate', and correcting 'have it have a lot of figures' to 'there are many figures' improves grammar.

× Also they can be a lot of flavors that everyone wanted to try but don't have. So I think.

✓ Also, there can be many flavors that everyone wants to try but doesn't have. So, I think so.

The sentence has tense and pronoun agreement errors. Changing 'wanted' to 'wants' and 'don't have' to 'doesn't have' matches the singular 'everyone'. Adding 'there can be' clarifies the sentence.