Chocolate— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct grammar and avoiding redundancy. For example, say 'I love chocolate and often buy it to cheer myself up after a stressful day at work.' This is clearer and more effective.

Exemplo: Yes, I love eating chocolate. I often buy it to keep in my fridge and eat when I feel stressed or tired after work. It helps me feel better.

Sugestão: Improve your answer by using correct grammar and clearer structure. Avoid repeating phrases and be more specific. For example, say 'I usually buy chocolate once a week or once a month, depending on my budget, because it helps me relieve stress.'

Exemplo: I usually buy chocolate once a week or once a month, depending on how much money I have. Eating chocolate helps me relax and reduce stress.

Sugestão: Try to organize your answer with clear sentences and avoid filler words like 'um'. Use past tense correctly and be specific. For example, say 'Yes, I often ate chocolate as a child. Every Friday, my parents bought me different kinds of chocolate miniatures.'

Exemplo: Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid. Every Friday, my parents bought me a variety of small chocolates to enjoy.

Sugestão: Make your answer more fluent and clear by avoiding filler words and using correct grammar. For example, say 'Chocolate is popular worldwide because of its sweet taste and unique flavor that makes people feel happy.'

Exemplo: I think chocolate is popular all over the world because it tastes sweet and has a unique flavor that makes people feel happy when they eat it.

Sugestão: Clarify your answer by using correct vocabulary and grammar. Avoid unclear phrases. For example, say 'My favorite chocolate is dark chocolate with about 70% cacao because it is not too sweet and has a rich texture.'

Exemplo: My favorite chocolate is dark chocolate with around 70% cacao. It is not very sweet and has a rich, thick texture that I enjoy.

Sugestão: Improve your answer by using clear and correct sentences. For example, say 'Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift because many people enjoy it. It is often given during celebrations and special occasions.'

Exemplo: Yes, I believe chocolate makes a great gift. Many people love it, and it is commonly given during celebrations and special events.

× As I have mentioned, since I'm a chocolate lovers, I would definitely buy a chocolate once a week or once a month if it depends on if I have money or not.

✓ As I have mentioned, since I'm a chocolate lover, I would definitely buy chocolate once a week or once a month depending on whether I have money or not.

The word 'lovers' is plural but the subject 'I' is singular, so it should be 'lover'. Also, 'a chocolate' is incorrect because 'chocolate' is uncountable here; no article is needed. The phrase 'if it depends on if' is awkward and corrected to 'depending on whether'.

× I would buy chocolate to fill in my fridge whenever I get sad or tired from it's just from a stress day on from work.

✓ I would buy chocolate to fill my fridge whenever I get sad or tired from just a stressful day at work.

The phrase 'fill in my fridge' is incorrect; it should be 'fill my fridge'. 'It's just from a stress day on from work' is ungrammatical and unclear; corrected to 'just a stressful day at work'.

× I would definitely choose chocolate to it.

✓ I would definitely choose chocolate.

The phrase 'choose chocolate to it' is incorrect; 'to it' is unnecessary and should be removed.

× As I have mentioned, since I'm a chocolate lovers, I would definitely buy a chocolate once a week or once a month if it depends on if I have money or not.

✓ As I have mentioned, since I'm a chocolate lover, I would definitely buy chocolate once a week or once a month depending on whether I have money or not.

Repeated correction for plural 'lovers' to singular 'lover' and removal of article 'a' before 'chocolate' as it is uncountable.

× But still I would choose chocolate to it because it is something that I can eat to relieve my stress.

✓ But still I would choose chocolate because it is something that I can eat to relieve my stress.

The phrase 'choose chocolate to it' is incorrect; 'to it' should be removed.

× Of course, yes, UM, since. I was a kid, I love to eat chocolate, so my Friday I'll be bought me a variety of chocolate miniatures friend kind of chocolate.

✓ Of course, yes. Since I was a kid, I loved to eat chocolate, so on Fridays my parents bought me a variety of miniature chocolates.

The sentence mixes tenses and has unclear phrases. 'I love' should be past tense 'I loved' to match 'since I was a kid'. 'My Friday I'll be bought me' is incorrect; corrected to 'on Fridays my parents bought me'. 'Chocolate miniatures friend kind of chocolate' is unclear and corrected to 'a variety of miniature chocolates'.

× So yes, I it chocolates a lot in there was a kid and now I'm I have money and buy it on my own.

✓ So yes, I ate chocolates a lot when I was a kid and now I have money and buy them on my own.

'I it chocolates' is incorrect; corrected to 'I ate chocolates'. 'In there was a kid' is incorrect; corrected to 'when I was a kid'. 'Buy it' changed to 'buy them' to refer to chocolates plural.

× Uhm, the reason that I think chocolate is popular around the world because of its sweetness an it kind of like.

✓ Uhm, the reason I think chocolate is popular around the world is because of its sweetness and its kind of like...

Missing 'is' after 'reason'. 'An' should be 'and'. 'It kind of like' is incomplete; 'its kind of like' is better but sentence is incomplete.

× L have like a unique a test which is make can make people feel happy whenever they taste chocolate.

✓ It has a unique taste which can make people feel happy whenever they taste chocolate.

'L have like a unique a test' is incorrect; corrected to 'It has a unique taste'. 'Which is make can make' is redundant and incorrect; corrected to 'which can make'.

× My favorite flavor of chocolate would be over the one that doesn't have like a really sweet tales which contain like 770% of cacao is not really sweet and it has like a bit of thickness like.

✓ My favorite flavor of chocolate would be the one that doesn't have a really sweet taste, which contains about 70% cacao. It is not very sweet and has a bit of thickness.

'Over the one' is incorrect; should be 'the one'. 'Tales' should be 'taste'. '770%' is likely a typo for '70%'. Sentence is fragmented and corrected for clarity.

× So 10 certainly yes, I think chocolate can be a special snack or a special trade mean for people who love chocolate like me.

✓ So definitely yes, I think chocolate can be a special snack or a special treat for people who love chocolate like me.

'So 10 certainly yes' is incorrect; corrected to 'So definitely yes'. 'Trade mean' is incorrect; corrected to 'treat'.

× An also chocolate is also considered as a kind of give for celebration and a special occasion as well.

✓ Also, chocolate is considered a kind of gift for celebrations and special occasions as well.

'An also' should be 'Also'. 'Give' should be 'gift'. 'Celebration and a special occasion' corrected to plural 'celebrations and special occasions' for general meaning.