Chocolate— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some language errors, such as 'Talk talk late' and 'knew' instead of 'new'. Try to be more precise and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences for clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, I like eating chocolate because it satisfies my sweet cravings. Moreover, chocolate comes in various types like dark, milk, and white chocolate. I enjoy trying new flavours as they offer different tastes and experiences.

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy, such as 'I can't resist on my sweet cravings' and repeated 'when'. Try to use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas and keep sentences concise.

Exemplo: I eat chocolate every day; however, I am aware it is not good for my dental health. I usually enjoy it with a cup of tea or coffee, and sometimes I have it as a snack between meals when I feel hungry.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to use linking words like 'although' to connect contrasting ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, watch for small errors like 'in a just a couple of days'.

Exemplo: Yes, I used to eat a lot of chocolate as a child. Although my dad bought a week's supply, I often finished it within a couple of days. Sometimes, I even got cavities, but I found it hard to resist my sweet cravings.

Sugestão: Your answer has good points but contains some awkward phrasing like 'intense an moist flavor' and 'large number of masses'. Try to use more natural expressions and linking words such as 'because' and 'also' to improve coherence.

Exemplo: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it has a pleasant, rich flavour that is not overly sweet. Also, it comes in many varieties and flavours, which appeal to a wide range of people.

Sugestão: Your answer is enthusiastic but somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors like 'very much delicious' and 'so much crunchy'. Try to use varied vocabulary and link your ideas smoothly within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: My favourite flavour is white chocolate with a layer of caramel and crushed Oreos. I enjoy it because it tastes delicious and has a crunchy texture, which makes it very enjoyable to eat.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by avoiding redundancy like 'give, present' and minor errors such as 'an enjoys'. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to connect ideas more naturally.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe chocolates make good gifts because most people enjoy eating them. Also, in my country, it is a tradition to give sweets on special occasions, symbolising love and affection.

× I love to eat chocolate because I believe that I have a sweet thought and that satisfies my sweet cravings.

✓ I love to eat chocolate because I believe that I have sweet thoughts and that satisfies my sweet cravings.

The adjective 'sweet' should be pluralized to 'sweet thoughts' to correctly refer to multiple thoughts. Using 'a sweet thought' is less natural in this context.

× Also, chocolate is available in different versions such as Talk talk late, white chocolate and so on an nowadays knew.

✓ Also, chocolate is available in different versions such as dark chocolate, white chocolate and so on, and nowadays new flavors are available.

The original sentence contains spelling errors ('Talk talk late' should be 'dark chocolate', 'an' should be 'and', 'knew' should be 'new'). Correct spelling and proper conjunction use improve clarity.

× Flavors of all chocolate are also available and I'm always curious to try the new flavors.

✓ Flavors of all chocolates are also available and I'm always curious to try new flavors.

'Flavors of all chocolate' should be 'flavors of all chocolates' to indicate plural. Also, 'the new flavors' is better as 'new flavors' to generalize.

× I can't resist on my sweet cravings especially when I when I'm craving chocolate.

✓ I can't resist my sweet cravings especially when I'm craving chocolate.

The verb 'resist' does not require the preposition 'on'. Removing 'on' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I preferred to have chocolates with a cup of tea or coffee or they are a good snacks between the meals whenever I feel hungry.

✓ I prefer to have chocolates with a cup of tea or coffee as they are good snacks between meals whenever I feel hungry.

'Preferred' should be present tense 'prefer' to match habitual action. 'They are a good snacks' is incorrect; 'they are good snacks' is correct as 'snacks' is plural.

× I used to finish them in a just a couple of days.

✓ I used to finish them in just a couple of days.

The phrase 'a just a couple' is redundant; 'just a couple' is correct.

× Also sometimes I got cavities but then also it was hard for me to resist my sweet cravings.

✓ Also, sometimes I got cavities, but it was still hard for me to resist my sweet cravings.

The phrase 'then also' is awkward; 'still' is more appropriate. Commas improve sentence flow.

× Well, in my opinion I guess most of the people like chocolates because they're not too sweet and they have a very good intense an moist flavor.

✓ Well, in my opinion, I guess most people like chocolates because they're not too sweet and have a very good, intense, and moist flavor.

'Most of the people' should be 'most people'. 'An' should be 'and'. Commas separate adjectives properly.

× Also they are available in very different types and flavors which can be enjoyed by a large number of masses.

✓ Also, they are available in many different types and flavors which can be enjoyed by a large number of people.

'Very different types' is better as 'many different types'. 'Masses' is less appropriate than 'people' in this context.

× Speaking about my favorite flavor is a chocolate white chocolate with a layer of caramel and crushed Oreos inside it.

✓ Speaking about my favorite flavor, it is white chocolate with a layer of caramel and crushed Oreos inside it.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. Adding a comma and rephrasing improves clarity.

× I love it very much because it's very much delicious.

✓ I love it very much because it's very delicious.

'Very much delicious' is incorrect; 'very delicious' is the correct form.

× It's so much crunchy as well.

✓ It's very crunchy as well.

'So much crunchy' is incorrect; 'very crunchy' is the correct adverbial phrase.

× Yes, I think chocolates are a good gift to give, present to others as everyone loves an enjoys eating them.

✓ Yes, I think chocolates are a good gift to give or present to others as everyone loves and enjoys eating them.

The conjunction 'an' is a typo for 'and'. Adding 'or' clarifies the options for giving gifts.

× Also, it is a culture or tradition in our country to give sweets to the person on their special occasions.

✓ Also, it is a culture or tradition in our country to give sweets to people on their special occasions.

'The person' is too specific; 'people' is more general and appropriate. 'On their special occasions' is correct.