Chocolate— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and coherent by avoiding short, choppy sentences and redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide a clear reason for your preference.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy eating chocolate because I love different types like Kit Kat and Dairy Milk. Additionally, I also like other sweets, which makes chocolate one of my favourite treats.

Sugestão: Focus on making your answer concise and clear. Avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to explain your reason logically.

Exemplo: I usually eat chocolate once a week when I have a craving because I know eating it daily isn't good for my health.

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Avoid fragmented sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, correct vocabulary mistakes such as 'found' to 'fond' and 'suite' to 'sweets'.

Exemplo: When I was a kid, I used to eat chocolate daily because I loved it. Besides chocolates, I also enjoyed delicious candies and was very fond of sweets.

Sugestão: Make your answer more organized and complete. Use linking words to list reasons clearly and avoid incomplete sentences. Provide specific examples to support your points.

Exemplo: Chocolate is popular worldwide because of its creamy and sweet taste. Moreover, it comes in various textures and flavours, such as peanut chocolate for those who enjoy nuts.

Sugestão: Avoid repeating the same idea. Combine your sentences to make your answer more natural and concise.

Exemplo: My favourite flavour of chocolate is caramel because I really enjoy its sweet and rich taste.

Sugestão: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your reasons logically and correct grammar mistakes.

Exemplo: Yes, I think chocolate makes a great gift for special occasions like birthdays or Christmas because it is affordable and most people enjoy eating it. Unlike other gifts, chocolate can be shared and brings happiness.

× I like many chocolates like Kit Kat. Dairy Milk.

✓ I like many chocolates like Kit Kat and Dairy Milk.

The original sentence incorrectly separates 'Kit Kat' and 'Dairy Milk' with a period, which disrupts the plural list. Using 'and' correctly connects the plural items in the list.

× I love eating them and. Also. I love eating many other sweets.

✓ I love eating them. Also, I love eating many other sweets.

The original sentence has incorrect punctuation with periods placed improperly, causing sentence fragments. Correct punctuation and conjunction use improve clarity and sentence structure.

× I eat chocolate once in a week whenever I have like craving for eating chocolate so I eat chocolate but not daily because if it is not good for our health so I eat chocolate once in a week.

✓ I eat chocolate once a week whenever I have a craving for it, but not daily because it is not good for our health, so I eat chocolate once a week.

The phrase 'once in a week' should be 'once a week'. Also, 'like craving' is incorrect; it should be 'a craving'. The sentence is long and run-on; breaking it into clearer parts improves understanding.

× When I was a kid I used to eat chocolate dilly because.

✓ When I was a kid, I used to eat chocolate daily because.

The word 'dilly' is a misspelling of 'daily'. Also, a comma after the introductory clause improves readability.

× I am very found of the suite.

✓ I am very fond of sweets.

'Found' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'fond'. Also, 'suite' is a misspelling of 'sweets'.

× Chocolate is very popular around the world due to its creamy taste and it is also very sweet and also it comes with the various textures and like various taste.

✓ Chocolate is very popular around the world due to its creamy taste; it is also very sweet and comes with various textures and tastes.

The phrase 'comes with the various textures and like various taste' is awkward. Removing 'the' before 'various textures' and correcting 'like various taste' to 'various tastes' improves grammar and clarity.

× Some are peanuts chocolate people who like to eat peanuts can have the peanuts chocolate but some are very.

✓ Some chocolates have peanuts; people who like to eat peanuts can have peanut chocolate, but some are very different.

The original sentence is incomplete and confusing. Clarifying the sentence structure and completing the thought improves comprehension.

× Yes, it is very good to treat someone with the chocolate on the special occasions like the birthday parties or a Christmas because also it is the cheap cheap and also most people like to eat chocolate instead of buying gifts.

✓ Yes, it is very good to treat someone with chocolate on special occasions like birthday parties or Christmas because it is cheap and most people like to eat chocolate instead of buying gifts.

'The chocolate' should be 'chocolate' without 'the' as it is uncountable here. 'The birthday parties' should be 'birthday parties' without 'the'. 'A Christmas' is incorrect; 'Christmas' does not need an article. Also, 'cheap cheap' is repetitive and should be 'cheap'.

× Like gift can be kept in one place but the chocolate can be used in eating and spreading the happiness.

✓ A gift can be kept in one place, but chocolate can be eaten and spread happiness.

The sentence is awkward and unclear. 'Like gift' should be 'A gift'. 'Used in eating' is incorrect; 'eaten' is appropriate. 'Spreading the happiness' is better as 'spread happiness' for natural expression.