MemoryPart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Are you good at memorising things?

Candidato

Actually I'm not good at to memorize things, I usually forgot where I placed the keys on my phones and so I rely heavily on the technique like use apps to keep the in important information or decline on my phones.

Examinador

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Candidato

Yes, I have forgot something important before. I once forgotten my best friend's birthdays. I feel absolutely terrible on it because we are so close, so I make sure to apologize sincerely and promise to make up for them.

Examinador

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Candidato

I need to remember necessary medications and vitamins, stay hydrated and it's regular meals and I also, uh, incorporate exercise into my routine and get more enough sleep to make sure.

Examinador

How do you remember important things?

Candidato

I usually write important things now, but I prefer using technique like set alarms and using apps like a calendar or To Do List to keep track of the dates or deadlines of important things.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 6.0Fluência e coerência: 6.0Pronúncia: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 6.0

Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Pontuação: 58.0

Sugestão: 回答要更自然、句子结构要正确并直接回应问题。避免冗长或重复的信息,注意时态和单复数,以及词汇搭配(例如 say “good at memorising” 而不是 “good at to memorize”)。可以给出一到两个具体方法作为支持细节,并用连接词衔接。

Exemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget where I put my keys or my phone, so I rely on apps to store important information and set reminders on my phone.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Pontuação: 62.0

Sugestão: 回答应使用正确时态和更自然的表达。描述具体事件时要提供简短的后续行动细节,使用连接词使内容连贯,例如先说明事实,再说明感受,然后说明补救措施。避免语法错误如 “have forgot” 和“forgotten” 用法错误。

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, I once missed my best friend's birthday; I felt terrible because we are close, so I apologised sincerely and planned a special dinner to make it up to them.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Pontuação: 60.0

Sugestão: 回答应更简洁且语法正确,按逻辑列出需要记住的事项并用连接词衔接。避免口语填充词(如 uh)和语法错误(如 “get more enough sleep”)。可以分为两到三句,每句突出一类要点。

Exemplo: I need to remember to take my medications and vitamins, and to stay hydrated and eat regular meals. I also try to schedule regular exercise and make sure I get enough sleep.

How do you remember important things?

Pontuação: 66.0

Sugestão: 回答应直接说明方法并给出具体例子,注意词汇搭配(例如 “use techniques such as setting alarms”)。可以用一两句描述首选方法,并举一两个具体应用。保持句子简短且连贯。

Exemplo: I usually write down important tasks, but I prefer using techniques such as setting alarms and using apps like Google Calendar or a to-do list app to track dates and deadlines.

Gramática

Verb + -ing form

× Actually I'm not good at to memorize things, I usually forgot where I placed the keys on my phones and so I rely heavily on the technique like use apps to keep the in important information or decline on my phones.

Actually I'm not good at memorising things. I usually forget where I placed my keys or my phone, so I rely heavily on techniques like using apps to keep important information on my phone.

错误类型:动词后接 -ing 形式 说明:在短语 “good at” 之后应使用动词的 -ing 形式,因此应为 “good at memorising” 而不是 “good at to memorize”。此外,句中还有其他问题:动词时态和拼写(“forgot” 应为现在时 “forget” 与现在习惯对应),名词复数和所有格(“keys on my phones” 应为 “my keys or my phone”),不定式/动名词搭配(“technique like use apps” 应为 “techniques like using apps”),以及多余或错误词序(“the in important information or decline on my phones” 改为 “important information on my phone”)。建议:学习固定搭配(good at + -ing),注意时态一致性(描述习惯用一般现在时),并把句子分成更短的句子以提高清晰度。

Past tense issue

× Yes, I have forgot something important before. I once forgotten my best friend's birthdays. I feel absolutely terrible on it because we are so close, so I make sure to apologize sincerely and promise to make up for them.

Yes, I have forgotten something important before. I once forgot my best friend's birthday. I felt absolutely terrible about it because we were so close, so I made sure to apologize sincerely and promised to make up for it.

错误类型:过去时/过去分词使用错误 说明:“have forgot” 和 “once forgotten” 的使用不当。现在完成时应使用过去分词 “forgotten” 与助动词 have(have forgotten)。此外,描述单次过去事件使用一般过去时(I once forgot)。“birthdays” 若指一次某位朋友的生日应为单数 “birthday”。情感和随后的动作发生在过去,应使用过去时(felt, made sure, promised)。介词搭配也有错误:应为 “terrible about it” 而不是 “on it”,以及代词指代(make up for it)而不是复数。建议:复习现在完成时(have + 过去分词)和一般过去时的用法,注意代词和介词固定搭配。

Present tense issue

× I need to remember necessary medications and vitamins, stay hydrated and it's regular meals and I also, uh, incorporate exercise into my routine and get more enough sleep to make sure.

I need to remember necessary medications and vitamins, stay hydrated and have regular meals, and I also incorporate exercise into my routine and get enough sleep to make sure.

错误类型:现在时和词序问题 说明:原句中“it's regular meals” 是错误用法,应为动词短语 “have regular meals”。“get more enough sleep” 中 “more” 与 “enough” 冲突,应使用 “get enough sleep” 或 “get more sleep”。整句描述现在的习惯,应使用一般现在时并保持并列结构一致(动词短语并列)。建议:保持平行结构(use verbs consistently),去掉多余词汇,选择合适的固定搭配(have meals, get enough sleep)。

Verb + -ing form

× I usually write important things now, but I prefer using technique like set alarms and using apps like a calendar or To Do List to keep track of the dates or deadlines of important things.

I usually write down important things now, but I prefer using techniques like setting alarms and using apps like a calendar or a to-do list to keep track of important dates and deadlines.

错误类型:动词后接 -ing 形式 与 冠词/名词复数 说明:“prefer using technique like set alarms” 中应采用动名词形式并确保名词形式正确:“prefer using techniques like setting alarms”。“write important things” 更自然为 “write down important things”。“To Do List” 可写为 “to-do list”,并注意冠词和复数(techniques, a calendar or a to-do list)。并列项也应保持一致(important dates and deadlines)。建议:学习 prefer + -ing 的结构,动词短语如 write down,setting alarms,注意名词复数和冠词的使用。

Vocabulário

BestFinest; To the highest standard
CloseNear; Dense; Evenly matched; Immediate; Intimate
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
TerribleDreadful; Repulsive; Severe; Unkind
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