Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 문법과 문장 구조 오류를 고치고 간결하게 말하는 연습이 필요합니다. 주어-동사 일치(예: I don't have good memory), 불필요한 반복 제거, 그리고 약속에 대해 말할 때는 간단한 이유를 덧붙이면 자연스럽습니다. 또한 문장은 최대 3~4개로 유지하세요. 예를 들어 현재 습관과 이유를 분리해서 말하면 명확해집니다.

Exemplo: No, I don't have a good memory, so I write everything down. If I have an appointment, I always check my calendar to make sure I don't forget it.

Sugestão: 의미 전달이 불분명하고 어순과 단어 선택에 문제가 있습니다. 과거 경험을 말할 때는 구체적인 사건을 하나 골라서 언제, 무엇을, 어떤 결과였는지 순서대로 말하세요. 연결어(to explain sequence)나 이유를 보여주는 표현을 사용하세요. 불필요한 단어는 빼고 문장을 명확히 하세요.

Exemplo: Yes, once I forgot a lunch with a friend last year because I didn't write it down. I felt bad, so now I always add social plans to my phone calendar to avoid missing them.

Sugestão: 핵심 어휘를 정확히 사용하고 문장을 간결하게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다. 'promise' 대신 'appointments' 또는 'plans'가 자연스럽고, 이유를 말할 때는 구체적으로 설명하세요. 주제문을 먼저 말하고, 이어서 한두 문장으로 구체적 이유를 덧붙이세요.

Exemplo: I need to remember my appointments and plans. For example, I always remember lunches with friends because spending time with them is a valuable opportunity to catch up.

Sugestão: 동사 형태와 어순(예: 'I usually record things on my smartphone calendar')을 교정해야 합니다. 중복 표현('helpful and helpful')을 피하고 구체적인 방법을 하나나 두 개만 명확히 설명하세요. 또한 마지막의 의미없는 표현은 제거하세요.

Exemplo: I usually record important tasks on my smartphone calendar because it sends me reminders. Sometimes I also write notes on a desk calendar for quick reference.

× No, I don't have a good memories so therefore I always writing more everything and I if I have a promise I check my calendar.

✓ No, I don't have good memories, so I always write everything down. And if I make a plan, I check my calendar.

'a good memories' is incorrect because 'memories' is plural and should not have 'a'; use 'good memories' or better 'a good memory' depending on meaning. 'I always writing more everything' uses the wrong verb form; use simple present 'I always write' and place 'everything down' for the action of recording. 'I if I have a promise' is ungrammatical; use 'if I make a plan' or 'if I have an appointment' to sound natural. Suggestions: remove the article before plural nouns, use base verb for simple present with 'I', and choose natural collocations like 'write everything down' or 'make a plan'.

× Sometimes I program my lunch promise with my friends. It is very on pleasure, so I try to write my promise on my calendar. It time I I very appreciated my friend.

✓ Sometimes I arrange lunch plans with my friends. It is very enjoyable, so I try to write the plans in my calendar. At those times, I really appreciate my friends.

'program' is the wrong verb; 'arrange' or 'plan' is correct. 'lunch promise' is unnatural; use 'lunch plans'. 'It is very on pleasure' mixes words; use 'It is very enjoyable' (present) or 'It was very enjoyable' (past). 'I try to write my promise on my calendar' should be 'write the plans in my calendar' (use 'in' or 'on' depending on context; 'in my calendar' is common). 'It time I I very appreciated my friend' has tense and structure errors; use 'At those times, I really appreciate my friends' (present) or 'I really appreciated my friends' (past). Suggestions: choose correct verbs like 'arrange'/'plan', use natural nouns 'plans', fix tense consistency, and use correct prepositions 'in my calendar'.

× I think the most important things is promise. If I have a lunch promise, I have to go lunch because it is very precious opportunity with my spending time with my friend.

✓ I think the most important thing is keeping promises. If I have a lunch plan, I have to go because it is a precious opportunity to spend time with my friend.

'the most important things is' mixes plural 'things' with singular 'is'; use singular 'thing' with 'is'. 'promise' should be plural/gerund 'keeping promises' or 'a promise' depending on meaning. 'a lunch promise' is unnatural; use 'a lunch plan' or 'a lunch appointment'. 'go lunch' is incorrect; say 'go' or 'go to lunch'. 'it is very precious opportunity with my spending time with my friend' is ungrammatical; use 'it is a precious opportunity to spend time with my friend'. Suggestions: ensure subject and verb number agree, use natural collocations like 'keep promises' and 'lunch plan', and use infinitive 'to spend' after 'opportunity'.

× I usually memories on my calendar in my smartphone. It is very helpful and helpful my memorizing. Sometimes I write a lot on the calendar on my desk. I you.

✓ I usually record memories in the calendar on my smartphone. It is very helpful for my memory. Sometimes I write a lot on the calendar on my desk.

'I usually memories' is incorrect because 'memory' is a noun and the verb is needed; use 'record memories' or 'save notes'. 'on my calendar in my smartphone' mixes prepositions; use 'in the calendar on my smartphone' or 'on my smartphone calendar'. 'It is very helpful and helpful my memorizing' is ungrammatical; say 'It is very helpful for my memory' or 'It helps me remember'. 'I you.' is incomplete and should be removed. Suggestions: use correct verb+noun combinations like 'record memories' or 'write reminders', choose proper prepositions 'in/on', and express benefit with 'helpful for X' or 'helps me Y'.