Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 答案表达基本清晰，但存在语法和用词不准、重复以及语气词过多的问题。应直接回答问题（如“I’m not good at memorising things”），然后用一到两句具体例子支持，避免重复和多余短语（如“to the home”不自然，过多“uh”）。注意时态和单数/复数（phone 应为 phone 或 my phone，keys 正确）。

Exemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget my phone or keys and have to go back home to get them, which is quite inconvenient.

Sugestão: 回答有内容但组织混乱、语法时态不一致且用词不当（“forgot it behind my mind”不正确，“send the keys to her”用法怪异）。应用一到两句描述具体事件，先说发生了什么，再说结果或改进措施，使用正确时态和连词以保持连贯。避免重复单词（send send）。

Exemplo: Yes. Last summer my mother asked me to bring her house keys, but I forgot because I was playing video games for hours. After that incident I started writing reminders so I wouldn't forget important things.

Sugestão: 回答内容较全面，但有赘余口语填充词（uh, you know）和重复（or a significant assignment 或 deadlines 重复意义）。建议先给出主题句（I need to remember deadlines and class schedules），然后用具体细节补充（例如具体时间、课程地点），并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Exemplo: I need to remember deadlines for projects and assignments, as well as the times and classroom locations for my university courses. For instance, I usually note down due dates and lecture rooms so I don't miss anything.

Sugestão: 回答结构清晰且具体，但有个别词汇错误（“chat it”应为“check it”）和略显啰嗦。可稍微精简，并使用连接词提高流畅性，比如先概述方法然后举例说明。保证不超过五句。

Exemplo: I usually set reminders on my phone and keep a timetable in a notebook. I write down important tasks and carry the notebook with me so I can check it whenever necessary, which helps me stay organised.

× I usually forget to take my phones with me, and sometimes I forget my keys at home and I need to go back quickly to the home and get it.

✓ I usually forget to take my phone with me, and sometimes I forget my keys at home and need to go back quickly and get them.

原句中“phones”与上下文不一致，通常一人只携带一部手机，应使用单数“phone”。此外“go back quickly to the home and get it”存在代词与先行词不一致，先行词是“keys”（复数），应使用复数代词“them”；表达冗余可简化为“go back quickly and get them”。建议注意名词单复数一致以及代词指代一致。

× So I think I'm not skilled at, uh, remembering something.

✓ So I think I'm not good at remembering things.

原句中“skilled at”虽然可以后接动名词，但“skilled at remembering something”表达不自然，且“something”太笼统。更自然的搭配是“good at remembering things”或“not good at remembering things”。建议使用更常见的形容词搭配并用复数“things”泛指多项记忆事项。

× Yes I did. I remember it was the last summer holiday.

✓ Yes, I did. I remember it was last summer.

“the last summer holiday”在口语中冗长且有歧义，通常说“last summer”更自然且符合时态背景。建议简化表达以符合英语习惯。

× My mom asked me to send send the keys to her but I forgot it behind my mind.

✓ My mom asked me to send the keys to her, but I forgot about it.

原句有重复单词“send send”，且“forgot it behind my mind”是错误搭配，英语中应说“forgot about it”或“forgot to do it”。此处应使用“forgot about it”表示记性上忘记，或“forgot to send them”强调未执行动作。建议学习常用短语“forget about”和“forget to”。

× I just played the games for a long time. So after that I write down something that I need to.

✓ I had just been playing games for a long time, so after that I wrote down things I needed to.

句子中时间顺序混乱：描述过去的行为应使用过去完成进行时或过去完成时（had been playing / had played），后续结果用过去时（wrote down）。原句中“write”用到了现在时，与前文过去时不一致；“something that I need to”结尾不完整，应为“things I needed to”或“things I needed”。建议保持时态一致并完成句子结构。

× I think it must be some, uh, deadlines for important projects or a significant assignment or the, uh, you know, I need to attend many classes in my university, so I need to remember the time and the classroom of these classes.

✓ I think they might be deadlines for important projects, a significant assignment, or the times and classrooms of the many classes I need to attend at university.

原句中“it must be some deadlines”中代词“it”与后面的复数名词不一致，且“the classroom of these classes”用法不自然。改为复数“they”或直接列举可使主谓一致；“at university”比“in my university”更常见（若强调学校可用“at my university”）。另外将“time and the classroom”改为“times and classrooms”以保持数一致。建议注意代词与名词数一致，并使用更自然的搭配。

× As for me, I usually set reminders on my phone and keep a timetable in my notebook for important tasks. I like to write things down and carry the notebook with me so I can chat it whenever I need to, which helps me remember them.

✓ As for me, I usually set reminders on my phone and keep a timetable in my notebook for important tasks. I like to write things down and carry the notebook with me so I can check it whenever I need to, which helps me remember them.

原句“chat it”使用错误，正确动词应为“check”表示查看笔记本。动词选择错误导致句意不明。建议记住常用固定搭配，如“write things down”、“check it”来表达查看记录的意思。