Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct minor grammar errors, such as 'memorizing most things' instead of 'most of the thing'.

Exemplo: I'm not very good at memorising, especially people's faces and names, so I often need to refresh my memory to recall them.

Sugestão: Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. Provide a complete example with clear supporting details and use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I often forget important things; for instance, I sometimes forget to lock my house door, which is crucial for keeping my property safe.

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and grammar by using correct verb tenses and clearer linking words. Be more concise and avoid repeating similar ideas.

Exemplo: Every morning, I review my daily plan and tasks to ensure I remember my routine and complete everything on time.

Sugestão: Avoid repetition and hesitations. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide a clear, concise explanation of your methods.

Exemplo: For important tasks, I set reminders on my phone or write notes in my notebook, and sometimes I ask my husband to remind me later.

× So I would say I'm not good at memorizing most of the thing.

✓ So I would say I'm not good at memorizing most of the things.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because 'most of' refers to a quantity of multiple items, so the noun must be plural.

× Yes, I have faced such situations very quite often.

✓ Yes, I have faced such situations quite often.

The phrase 'very quite often' is incorrect; 'quite often' is the correct adverbial phrase to indicate frequency. 'Very' is unnecessary and redundant here.

× Uh, for example, I forget to close the door of my, uh, house, which is really important for the security of our property and sometimes I forget to.

✓ Uh, for example, I forget to close the door of my house, which is really important for the security of our property, and sometimes I forget to.

The sentence is in present tense to describe habitual actions, so 'forget' is correct. However, the sentence is incomplete at the end; it should specify what is sometimes forgotten or be rephrased for clarity. Also, commas are added for better sentence structure.

× Usually I have a plan for that day, so every morning I recalled what should I do within that day and what are the tasks I should complete within the day.

✓ Usually I have a plan for that day, so every morning I recall what I should do that day and what tasks I should complete.

The verb 'recalled' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'recall' for habitual action. Also, the word order in 'what should I do' is incorrect in indirect questions; it should be 'what I should do'. The phrase is simplified for clarity and naturalness.

× If it's really important, I will keep a small reminder in either in my phone or in a notebook so I can refer when I see it.

✓ If it's really important, I keep a small reminder either on my phone or in a notebook so I can refer to it when I see it.

The use of 'will' is not necessary here because the sentence describes a habitual action, so present simple 'keep' is more appropriate. Also, 'refer' requires the preposition 'to' and 'either in my phone' should be 'either on my phone' because we say 'on the phone'.

× If it's really important, I will keep a small reminder in either in my phone or in a notebook so I can refer when I see it.

✓ If it's really important, I will keep a small reminder either on my phone or in a notebook so I can refer to it when I see it.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly repeated and 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone' because we use 'on' for devices like phones. Also, 'refer' needs the preposition 'to' to be correct.