Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "whatever things" and correct grammar errors such as "on a specific days" to "on specific days." Try to start with a clear topic sentence and then give a supporting detail using linking words.

Exemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things, so I rely on the calendar app on my phone to remind me of important tasks on specific days.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but a bit long and repetitive. Use linking words like "because" and avoid informal phrases like "oh, this is coming soon, You have to." Also, correct grammar such as "have it drop" to "put it" and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Exemplo: I haven't forgotten anything important because I always put meetings and plans in my phone's calendar app, which reminds me in advance.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and has several grammar mistakes, such as "Canada app" instead of "calendar app," and awkward phrasing like "work stuff." Try to organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and specific examples, using linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember social plans, like going out with friends, and work tasks. Therefore, I write these down in my calendar app to keep track of them.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains repetition and grammar errors, such as "Canada app" instead of "calendar app," and "you can later the app will remind you." Use linking words to improve coherence and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Exemplo: I usually use the calendar app on my phone because it's a useful device. The app lets me write down important tasks and reminds me in advance, so I can prepare well.

× I don't think I'm good at memorising things, that's why I use calendar on my phone to recall whatever things I need to do on a specific days.

✓ I don't think I'm good at memorising things, that's why I use a calendar on my phone to recall whatever things I need to do on specific days.

The word 'calendar' is countable and needs an article 'a' before it. Also, 'days' is plural, so 'a specific days' is incorrect; it should be 'specific days' without 'a'.

× So far in my life, I haven't really forgotten something important because whenever there's a planned or there's a meeting, I would definitely have it drop on my calendar app on my phone.

✓ So far in my life, I haven't really forgotten something important because whenever there's a plan or a meeting, I definitely put it on my calendar app on my phone.

The modal verb 'would' is incorrectly used here; 'would' implies conditional or habitual past, but the sentence refers to a habitual present action, so 'definitely put' is more appropriate. Also, 'planned' should be 'plan' as a noun, and 'have it drop' is incorrect phrasing; 'put it' is correct.

× So when the day is coming soon, the app would remind me, oh, this is coming soon, You have to.

✓ So when the day is coming soon, the app reminds me, 'Oh, this is coming soon, you have to prepare.'

The modal verb 'would' is incorrectly used for a habitual present action; 'reminds' is correct. Also, the sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity; adding 'prepare' completes the meaning. The comma before 'oh' should be followed by a quotation for clarity.

× For now, what I need to remember in my daily life is maybe some days, for example, when I need to go out with my friends on a specific day, then I need to write down on my Canada app.

✓ For now, what I need to remember in my daily life is maybe some days; for example, when I need to go out with my friends on a specific day, I need to write it down on my calendar app.

The app name is misspelled as 'Canada' instead of 'calendar'. Also, 'write down on my Canada app' is missing the object 'it'. The sentence structure is improved by adding a semicolon and correcting the app name.

× Also when there's a work stuff, I also need to memorize it.

✓ Also, when there's work stuff, I also need to memorize it.

The phrase 'a work stuff' is incorrect because 'stuff' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. The article 'a' should be removed.

× And The thing is I need to do.

✓ And the thing is, I need to do it.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object. Adding 'it' completes the sentence. Also, 'The' should be lowercase 'the' and a comma is needed after 'is'.

× Normally I would use the Canada app on my phone because phone now is a very important device in our lives and you can easily use your phone to write down the things you need to do on certain days and later you can later the app will remind you in advance so you can get yourself well prepared.

✓ Normally, I use the calendar app on my phone because the phone now is a very important device in our lives, and you can easily use your phone to write down the things you need to do on certain days. Later, the app will remind you in advance so you can get yourself well prepared.

The app name is misspelled as 'Canada' instead of 'calendar'. The sentence is a run-on and needs to be split into two sentences for clarity. The phrase 'you can later the app will remind you' is incorrect; it should be 'Later, the app will remind you'. Also, 'phone now' should be 'the phone now'.