Memory— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidato
Of course no. I even feel like I I may have Alzheimer's disease at a very young age. Not only do I often struggle to recall people's faces and names, but I usually rely on To Do List to make sure what I need to do every day.
Examinador
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidato
Yes, I have. I once missed a concert by my piano idol Yu Jia Wong because I have an academic program which my tutor arranged and several compulsory exams to join that week. As a result, I completely ignored the concert. I still feel disappointed to this day.
Examinador
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidato
In fact, it's significant and essential for me to keep the university course assignments and daily work of online internships in mind. Since I'm really afraid of delaying or forgetting work, I really pay attention to personal matters.
Examinador
How do you remember important things?
Candidato
Generally speaking, I prefer to organize my tasks by making monthly plans. I make monthly plans at the beginning of the month according to the four quadrants method, which means divide things according to their importance and priority. This way I can basically remember everything.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和重复（"I I"），表达不够自然。建议避免夸张的表达（如“Alzheimer's disease”），并使用更自然的句式。同时，回答应简洁明了，避免冗余。
Exemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. I often forget people's names and faces, so I usually rely on a To-Do List to keep track of my daily tasks.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: 回答内容较具体，但时态使用不准确（"I have"应为过去时），且句子结构略显复杂。建议使用正确时态，简化句子结构，使表达更流畅自然。
Exemplo: Yes, I once missed a concert by my piano idol Yu Jia Wong because I had an academic program and several compulsory exams that week. Therefore, I completely missed the concert and felt very disappointed.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答中词汇重复（"really"两次），表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达，避免重复，并且句子结构可以更简洁。
Exemplo: I need to remember my university assignments and tasks for my online internship. I'm careful to keep track of these because I don't want to miss any deadlines.
How do you remember important things?
Pontuação: 80.0Sugestão: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但部分表达略显生硬（如“which means divide things”）。建议使用更自然的连接词和表达方式，使语言更流畅。
Exemplo: Generally, I organize my tasks by making monthly plans. At the beginning of each month, I use the four quadrants method to prioritize tasks based on their importance and urgency. This helps me remember everything effectively.
Gramática
× Of course no.
✓ Of course not.
此处应使用否定副词“not”来回答否定问题，“no”用作副词时不合适，导致句子结构错误。建议记住否定回答的正确用法。
× I even feel like I I may have Alzheimer's disease at a very young age.
✓ I even feel like I may have Alzheimer's disease at a very young age.
句子中“I I”重复，属于句子结构错误。应删除多余的“I”，避免重复。
× I usually rely on To Do List to make sure what I need to do every day.
✓ I usually rely on a To-Do List to make sure what I need to do every day.
“To Do List”前缺少冠词，且“To Do List”应为“To-Do List”，表示一类事物时需加不定冠词“a”。建议注意冠词的使用和固定搭配的正确写法。
× because I have an academic program which my tutor arranged and several compulsory exams to join that week.
✓ because I had an academic program which my tutor arranged and several compulsory exams to attend that week.
描述过去发生的事情，动词时态应为过去时，“have”应改为“had”，且“to join”不合适，参加考试应使用“to attend”。建议注意时态一致性和动词搭配。
× I still feel disappointed to this day.
✓ I still feel disappointed to this day.
此句无语法错误，表达正确。
× I really pay attention to personal matters.
✓ I really pay attention to personal matters.
此句无语法错误，表达正确。
× which means divide things according to their importance and priority.
✓ which means dividing things according to their importance and priority.
“which means”后应接动名词短语，表示“意味着做某事”，此处应使用“dividing”而非动词原形“divide”。建议注意动词形式的正确使用。
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