Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answerは自然な英語で話すことを心がけ、冗長な言葉や繰り返しを避けましょう。また、質問に直接答え、理由を簡潔に述べると良いです。例えば、"Not really, I often forget things so I need to review them several times because my memory isn't as sharp as before."のように。

Exemplo: Not really, I often forget things so I need to review them several times because my memory isn't as sharp as before.

Sugestão: 答えは質問に直接関連した内容に集中し、不要な情報や繰り返しを避けましょう。具体的な例を挙げて、理由や結果を説明すると良いです。例えば、"Yes, I once forgot my friend's birthday. I felt bad, so I apologized and gave a gift to make up for it."のように。

Exemplo: Yes, I once forgot my friend's birthday. I felt bad, so I apologized and gave a gift to make up for it.

Sugestão: 答えは明確なトピック文で始め、具体的な詳細を付け加えましょう。リンクワードを使って論理的に話をつなげると良いです。例えば、"I need to remember to schedule tasks and sometimes cancel appointments. This is important because forgetting deadlines or bills can cause problems."のように。

Exemplo: I need to remember to schedule tasks and sometimes cancel appointments. This is important because forgetting deadlines or bills can cause problems.

Sugestão: 答えは簡潔で自然な英語を使い、理由や効果を具体的に説明しましょう。例えば、"I write important things in my notebook or phone, and sometimes set reminders. This helps me manage my daily life effectively."のように。

Exemplo: I write important things in my notebook or phone, and sometimes set reminders. This helps me manage my daily life effectively.

× Not really I forget past so I need to review or refit things many times because umm sometimes uh, my uh, I, I grow going old now he he he.

✓ Not really, I forget the past so I need to review or refit things many times because, umm, sometimes, uh, I, I am growing old now, he he he.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'forget past' which lacks the article 'the' and the verb tense is inconsistent. 'Forget' should be in present tense here to express a habitual action, but 'grow going old' is incorrect; it should be 'am growing old' to indicate a present continuous action. Adding commas improves clarity.

× Yes, I once forgot my friend's birthday. I feel bad so I apologize and give a gift.

✓ Yes, I once forgot my friend's birthday. I felt bad so I apologized and gave a gift.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the event happened in the past ('once forgot'), the feelings and actions related to that event should also be in the past tense ('felt', 'apologized', 'gave').

× Or sometimes I go into outside and I I I we we eat the dinner.

✓ Sometimes I go outside and we eat dinner.

The original sentence has redundant words ('I I I we we') and awkward phrasing ('go into outside'). The phrase 'go outside' is correct without 'into'. Also, 'eat the dinner' is better as 'eat dinner' unless referring to a specific dinner previously mentioned.

× I need to remember to schedule task and sometimes bail and decline.

✓ I need to remember to schedule tasks and sometimes bail and decline.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple items to schedule. Using the plural form is necessary to match the context.

× It's, it's very important to remember because, uh, they have a problem if we forget about the deadline or bills.

✓ It's very important to remember because there will be a problem if we forget about the deadline or bills.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrectly used to refer to 'a problem'. It should be 'there will be a problem' to correctly express the existence of a problem. Also, removing the repeated 'it's' improves fluency.

× Sometimes I also set reminder.

✓ Sometimes I also set reminders.

The noun 'reminder' should be plural 'reminders' because it refers to multiple instances of setting reminders.

× It's a very nice to my idea because important in the in the daily life.

✓ It's a very good idea because it's important in daily life.

The phrase 'very nice to my idea' is incorrect; 'very good idea' is the correct expression. Also, 'important in the in the daily life' is awkward; it should be 'important in daily life'. Adding 'it's' before 'important' completes the sentence.