Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by making it more concise and correcting grammar. Avoid repetition like 'daily, daily' and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, use singular/plural forms correctly, e.g., 'this practice makes it easier'.

Exemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I have followed a daily routine of meditation and yoga since childhood. This practice helps me concentrate better and improves my memory, making it easier to remember information effectively.

Sugestão: Your answer needs clarity and grammatical accuracy. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and repeated phrases. Also, correct phrases like 'forgot to bring my heart to care' to 'forgot to bring my hall ticket'. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I once forgot to bring my hall ticket for the 10th class exam because I was very stressed and overwhelmed with my studies. As a result, I accidentally left it at home, but fortunately, my mother brought it to me later.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid filler sounds like 'UH-1' and ensure sentences are complete. Use linking words to organise your ideas.

Exemplo: In daily life, I need to remember my routine carefully to stay organised. Additionally, it is important to remember special dates like birthdays and other important events so that I can plan accordingly.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and avoiding filler words like 'uh'. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more concise. For example, say 'I started writing a diary in childhood and continue it now to help me remember important things.'

Exemplo: I started writing a diary when I was a child, and I still continue this habit. By noting down my daily activities, I find it easier to remember important things and organise my thoughts effectively.

× Yes, I'm quite good at memorizing things because I followed daily, daily routine that includes meditation and yoga.

✓ Yes, I'm quite good at memorizing things because I follow a daily routine that includes meditation and yoga.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'followed' when describing a habitual action. Habitual actions should be expressed in the present tense, so 'follow' is correct here.

× Uh, these practice make it easier for me to remember the informations effectively.

✓ Uh, these practices make it easier for me to remember the information effectively.

'Practice' should be plural 'practices' to agree with 'these'. Also, 'information' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'informations'.

× Yes, I have forgotten something important before when I was a in childhood, I once forgot to bring my heart to care for the 10th class exam.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important before when I was a child; I once forgot to bring my heart to care for the 10th class exam.

The phrase 'was a in childhood' is incorrect; it should be 'was a child'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward and needs a semicolon or period to separate ideas.

× This was happened because I was very stressed and uh, with my studies.

✓ This happened because I was very stressed with my studies.

'Was happened' is incorrect; 'happened' is the correct past tense verb form. Also, 'and uh,' is unnecessary and disrupts sentence flow.

× Little my mom brought to me.

✓ Later, my mom brought it to me.

The phrase 'Little my mom brought to me' is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Later, my mom brought it to me' correctly conveys the intended meaning.

× UH-1 shall remember everything in our daily life like every day, we should remember about our routine, we should remember our routine properly first, we should follow a strict routine with we do our everyday and also we should remember our birthdays and our important days everything so that I.

✓ I shall remember everything in daily life. Every day, we should remember our routine properly; first, we should follow a strict routine in our everyday activities, and also remember our birthdays and other important days.

The original sentence is confusing and contains unnecessary words like 'UH-1'. 'Shall' is used correctly but the sentence needs restructuring for clarity and grammar. 'Remember about' should be 'remember' without 'about'. The phrase 'with we do our everyday' is incorrect and replaced with 'in our everyday activities'.

× Uh, usually I was started to write a diary when I was in childhood.

✓ Uh, usually I started to write a diary when I was a child.

'Was started' is incorrect; the simple past 'started' should be used. Also, 'in childhood' should be 'a child' for correct expression.

× Even now I continue writing that by using the help of this diary.

✓ Even now, I continue writing with the help of this diary.

'By using the help of' is awkward; 'with the help of' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, a comma after 'Even now' improves readability.

× I have noted everything that which I have done today or which about a day so that I can remember and I can memorize easily by using this diary that.

✓ I have noted everything I have done today or during the day so that I can remember and memorize easily by using this diary.

The phrase 'that which' is redundant; 'everything I have done' suffices. 'Which about a day' is incorrect and replaced with 'during the day'. The sentence ending 'by using this diary that' is incomplete and corrected for clarity.