Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答较自然且内容丰富，但缺少适当的连接词使句子间衔接更流畅。建议在句子间使用连接词如“however”, “therefore”等，使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: Well, I was better at memorising things when I was younger; for example, I could recall a Chinese poem after reading it once. However, nowadays, it is more difficult for me to memorise long texts because of the natural effects of aging.

Sugestão: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但可以增加更多细节描述和连接词，使表达更丰富和连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, once I forgot my house key when my husband was away on a business trip. As a result, I had nowhere to go and had to look for a hotel nearby, which was very stressful and inconvenient. This experience taught me to always double-check my belongings before leaving.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误（如“make A to do list”应为“make a to-do list”），且缺少连接词。建议注意语法准确性并使用连接词提升表达流畅度。

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember many important things related to my work. For example, I have to keep track of the latest technological and pharmaceutical developments to stay informed. Therefore, I always set reminders or make a to-do list to note down important topics.

Sugestão: 回答内容完整，但存在语法错误（如“make A to do list”应为“make a to-do list”），且句子衔接可更自然。建议注意冠词使用和连接词的合理运用。

Exemplo: I usually make a to-do list in my notebook to write down key points. Besides, setting alerts on my cell phone is also helpful because both methods help me stay organized and remind me of important appointments and deadlines.

× I have to track on the latest technological and pharmaceutical developments to keep me informed.

✓ I have to track the latest technological and pharmaceutical developments to keep myself informed.

动词track后不需要介词on，直接跟宾语即可。此外，keep后面应使用反身代词myself，表示保持自己处于某种状态。

× So I always set a reminder or make A to do list to write down some important topics.

✓ So I always set a reminder or make a to-do list to write down some important topics.

英文中，'to-do list'前应使用不定冠词a，且' to do list'应连写为'to-do list'。

× I usually make A to do list on my notebook to write down some key points.

✓ I usually make a to-do list in my notebook to write down some key points.

同样，'to-do list'前应使用不定冠词a，且'to do list'应连写为'to-do list'。此外，表达在笔记本上写，介词应为in而非on。

× Besides, setting alerts on cell phone could also be helpful because both of them could help me to stay organized and remind me some important appointments and big deadlines.

✓ Besides, setting alerts on my cell phone could also be helpful because both of them could help me stay organized and remind me of some important appointments and big deadlines.

'cell phone'前应加物主代词my，表示特指自己的手机。动词help后接动词原形，不用to。动词remind后应加介词of，表示提醒某事。