Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by a specific example. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, before my exams, I study and memorise important points the night before. This helps me recall the information while writing the exam. However, I try not to rely only on last-minute memorisation.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with a specific example. Use linking words like 'for instance' or 'however' to improve coherence. Try to be concise and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, during exams, even though I memorise a lot a week before, sometimes I forget key points during the test. This usually happens because I did not revise enough.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and has grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Keep your sentences concise and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: In my daily life, the most important thing I need to remember is my cell phone. Sometimes, I forget where I kept it, which wastes my time searching. Therefore, I try to always keep it in the same place to avoid losing it.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear topic sentence and explain your method with specific details. Use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to connect your ideas logically. Keep your answer concise and natural.

Exemplo: I remember important things by regularly checking if I still have them with me. For example, I often verify whether I have my keys or phone before leaving a place. This habit helps me avoid forgetting important items.

× Yes, I am good at memorizing things for in the best example I can give that during my examination I need to learn a lot of slavers and the night before I study and memorize a lot of things which I need to write and need to remember while writing my.

✓ Yes, I am good at memorizing things. For the best example I can give, during my examination I need to learn a lot of slavers, and the night before I study and memorize a lot of things which I need to write and remember while writing.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'for in the best example' which is confusing and ungrammatical. Also, the sentence is too long and lacks proper punctuation. Breaking it into two sentences and correcting the phrase improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I have forgotten something important sometimes. The best example is during exam when I study a day before a day, a week before my exam I memorize lot of things but can't remember during my exam times.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important sometimes. The best example is during an exam when I study a day before, a week before my exam I memorize lots of things but can't remember during my exam time.

The phrase 'during exam' needs an article 'an' before 'exam'. Also, 'lot of things' should be 'lots of things' to correctly express plural quantity. 'Exam times' should be 'exam time' as it refers to a specific period.

× The in my daily life the most important thing I need to remember is my cell phone because sometime I keep my cell phone at some place and forgets due to which I search and spend a lot of time in finding it and I need to remember it that it is with me or whether I have left it.

✓ In my daily life, the most important thing I need to remember is my cell phone because sometimes I keep my cell phone somewhere and forget it, due to which I search and spend a lot of time finding it. I need to remember whether it is with me or if I have left it somewhere.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions like 'at some place' which should be 'somewhere'. Also, 'forgets' is incorrect for the subject 'I'. The sentence is also too long and needs proper punctuation and conjunctions for clarity.

× I usually keep me updated within time period that that The thing is with me or not.

✓ I usually keep myself updated within a time period about whether the thing is with me or not.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' should be used instead of 'me' after 'keep'. Also, the sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So after a particular time period I check whether it is still present or I have kept somewhere.

✓ So after a particular time period, I check whether it is still present or if I have kept it somewhere.

The sentence is missing the object 'it' after 'kept' and needs the conjunction 'if' to connect the clauses properly. Adding a comma after the introductory phrase improves readability.