Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ja natural English er against. Apni 'I don't good at' er bodole 'I am not good at' bolte paren. Answer ta aro clear korte, apni sentence gulo ke shothik vabe structure korun ebong unnecessary filler words (uh, umm) koman. Apnar answer e kichu redundancy ache, ja avoid kora uchit. Apni chesta korun 3-4 sentence er moddhe shothik vabe topic express korte.

Exemplo: Actually, I am not very good at memorising things because I tend to forget details easily. For example, I sometimes forget assignment deadlines or class schedules. To manage this, I write notes and set reminders on my phone.

Sugestão: Apnar answer e grammar ebong sentence structure e onek vul ache. 'I have this type of experience to forgotten' er bodole 'I have experienced forgetting' bola uchit. Apni linking words use kore answer ke aro logical korte paren. Apnar answer e kichu unclear phrases ache, jemon 'my forwarding made him to feel very sad' - eta clear korte hobe. Apni chesta korun specific details shoho shothik sentence structure use korte.

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, I once forgot my best friend's birthday, which made him very sad. I apologized sincerely, and this experience taught me to be more careful in the future.

Sugestão: Apnar answer e filler words (uh) onek beshi, ja avoid kora uchit. Sentence gulo aro shothik vabe structure korte hobe. Apni linking words use kore answer ke logical korte paren. Apnar vocabulary aro boro korte hobe ebong sentence gulo ke concise rakhte hobe. Apni chesta korun specific responsibilities er kotha bolte.

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember my class schedules, assignment deadlines, and project submission dates. These are very important because as a student, I have many responsibilities to manage effectively.

Sugestão: Apnar answer e kichu grammar error ache, jemon 'for Don't forgotten' er bodole 'to not forget' bola uchit. Apni linking words use kore answer ke aro fluent korte paren. Apni vocabulary aro boro korte paren ebong sentence gulo ke concise rakhte hobe. Apni chesta korun specific methods shoho answer dite.

Exemplo: To remember important things, I set reminders and alarms on my phone. Additionally, I write notes on my smartphone, which helps me a lot since I tend to forget things easily.

× Actually, I don't good at memorising things.

✓ Actually, I'm not good at memorising things.

The phrase 'don't good' is incorrect because 'do' is an auxiliary verb used with base verbs, but 'good' is an adjective. The correct form is 'I'm not good' using the verb 'to be' with the adjective 'good'.

× That's why it uh, make me to feel uh, disappointed in my life, umm, uh, such as I forget the uh, assignment submission dates or my classes, uh, For this reason, I keep it up in my note and take reminders in my phone.

✓ That's why it makes me feel disappointed in my life, such as when I forget assignment submission dates or my classes. For this reason, I keep it in my notes and set reminders on my phone.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'make me to feel' is incorrect; the correct form is 'makes me feel' without 'to'. 'Keep it up in my note' is awkward; 'keep it in my notes' is better. 'Take reminders in my phone' should be 'set reminders on my phone'.

× Yes, I have this type of experience to forgotten something important.

✓ Yes, I have had this type of experience of forgetting something important.

The phrase 'to forgotten' is incorrect; 'forgotten' is a past participle and should not follow 'to'. The correct form is 'of forgetting' to express the experience. Also, 'have had' is used to indicate past experience up to now.

× We are very close and my forwarding made him to feel very sad and I was very apologize for this reason.

✓ We are very close and my forgetting made him feel very sad, and I was very sorry for this reason.

'Forwarding' is incorrect; the intended word is 'forgetting'. 'Made him to feel' should be 'made him feel' without 'to'. 'I was very apologize' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I was very sorry' because 'apologize' is a verb, and here an adjective is needed.

× It will be make memorable for my life.

✓ It will be memorable in my life.

'Will be make' is incorrect; the correct future tense form is 'will be' followed by an adjective. 'Memorable' is an adjective, so 'will be memorable' is correct. Also, 'for my life' should be 'in my life' to express something that will remain in memory.

× In my daily life, I need to suppose uh, my class schedules, uh, my assignment submission dates and my class project dates because this is very important for a student because I student have different type of responsibilities that uh that is one of them.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember my class schedules, assignment submission dates, and class project dates because these are very important for a student. Students have different types of responsibilities, and this is one of them.

'Need to suppose' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'need to remember'. 'I student have' is incorrect; it should be 'students have' to agree in number. 'Different type' should be 'different types' to match plural form. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× In my daily life for Don't forgotten the important things, I keep reminders and alarms in my phone and also keep relying notes on my smartphone.

✓ In my daily life, to not forget important things, I keep reminders and alarms on my phone and also keep relying on notes on my smartphone.

'Don't forgotten' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to not forget' or 'not to forget'. 'Keep relying notes' is incorrect; it should be 'keep relying on notes'. Prepositions 'on my phone' and 'on my smartphone' are correct.

× It's helped me a lot because I forget so much. It is the one of the best support for me.

✓ It has helped me a lot because I forget so much. It is one of the best supports for me.

'It's helped' should be 'It has helped' for present perfect tense. 'The one of the best support' is incorrect; it should be 'one of the best supports' without 'the' and with plural 'supports' to indicate one among many.