Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan mengandung pengulangan yang tidak perlu. Cobalah untuk memberikan jawaban yang lebih singkat dan jelas dengan kalimat topik yang langsung menjawab pertanyaan, diikuti oleh detail pendukung yang relevan tanpa pengulangan.

Exemplo: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I am a quick learner. For example, I can easily remember vocabulary words, which helps me achieve higher scores in exams.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda mengandung kesalahan tata bahasa dan pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan perbaiki tata bahasa agar jawaban terdengar lebih alami dan efektif.

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things like my wallet or phone when going out, which caused me some unpleasant situations.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan tidak lengkap. Cobalah untuk memberikan jawaban yang langsung dan lengkap dengan menggunakan kalimat yang terstruktur dan menghindari kalimat yang tidak selesai.

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember important items like my wallet, phone, and laptop. To help with this, I usually make a checklist before leaving the house.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan mengandung kalimat yang tidak koheren. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan terstruktur dengan baik, serta jelaskan metode yang Anda gunakan untuk mengingat sesuatu secara spesifik.

Exemplo: I remember important things by looking at photos and sometimes the memories just come to my mind suddenly.

× I'm good in memorizing something and it brings me to the to achieving higher score.

✓ I'm good at memorizing something and it helps me achieve higher scores.

The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at', not 'in'. Also, 'brings me to the to achieving' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me achieve'. Additionally, 'score' should be plural 'scores' to match the general meaning.

× sometimes I was forgot to bring my wallet when I'm going outside my home

✓ sometimes I forgot to bring my wallet when I was going outside my home

The verb 'forgot' is the simple past tense and should not be preceded by 'was'. Also, the time clause should be in past continuous 'was going' to match the past event.

× I forgot to bring phone when I'm going outside

✓ I forgot to bring my phone when I was going outside

The verb 'forgot' is simple past and should not be combined with 'I'm going' (present continuous). The correct past continuous 'was going' should be used to indicate past action.

× and it had me a really, really uh, very unpleasant situation.

✓ and it caused me a really, really unpleasant situation.

The phrase 'it had me a situation' is incorrect. The verb 'had' is not used this way. The correct verb is 'caused' to indicate that it brought about an unpleasant situation.

× I think we should make a list of the important things particularly in checklist.

✓ I think we should make a list of important things, particularly a checklist.

The phrase 'in checklist' is incorrect. It should be 'a checklist' as a countable noun. Also, 'the important things' can be 'important things' for general meaning.

× Checklist in our personal belongings like wallet, phone and also laptop but.

✓ A checklist of our personal belongings like wallet, phone, and laptop is useful.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb. Adding 'is useful' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× It's just come to my brain actually, and some good memories are sometimes.

✓ It just comes to my mind actually, and sometimes good memories appear.

The phrase 'come to my brain' is unnatural; 'come to my mind' is the correct expression. Also, 'some good memories are sometimes' is incomplete and awkward; rephrased for clarity.

× Uh, deployed on my brain suddenly

✓ Uh, pop up in my mind suddenly

The verb 'deployed' is incorrect here. The correct expression is 'pop up in my mind' to indicate sudden appearance of memories.

× and also, uh, I'm memorizing something by looking at photos.

✓ and also, uh, I memorize things by looking at photos.

The present continuous 'I'm memorizing' is less appropriate here; the simple present 'I memorize' is better to express habitual action.