Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Instead of saying 'I really have to do struggle', say 'I really struggle' or 'I find it difficult'. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things; I often find it difficult to remember details.

Sugestão: Improve your grammar and sentence structure. Use past tense consistently and avoid repetition. For example, say 'I once forgot to take my medicine and accidentally took it twice a day, although I was supposed to take it once a day.'

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things many times. For instance, once I forgot my medicine schedule and took the dose twice a day instead of once.

Sugestão: Make your answer clearer and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'I need to remember to perform five obligatory prayers and drink enough water daily. Since I often forget, I set alarms to remind me.'

Exemplo: I need to remember to perform five obligatory prayers and drink enough water every day. Because I often forget, I set alarms to help me.

Sugestão: Use clearer and more natural expressions. For example, say 'I write important tasks on notes and set alarms so that I can remember what I need to do today or tomorrow.' Avoid repetition like 'so so'.

Exemplo: I write down important tasks on notes and set alarms to remind me of what I need to do today or tomorrow.

× No I'm not, I really have to do struggle while memorizing things.

✓ No, I'm not. I really have to struggle while memorizing things.

The phrase 'do struggle' is incorrect because 'struggle' is a verb that does not require 'do' before it in this context. The correct form is simply 'I really have to struggle'.

× Yes, many times. However, I remember one time I have forgotten about my medicine dose and I took it twice a day, but I had to take once a day.

✓ Yes, many times. However, I remember one time I forgot my medicine dose and took it twice a day, but I was supposed to take it once a day.

The sentence mixes present perfect 'have forgotten' with past narrative. The correct past tense 'forgot' should be used. Also, 'had to take once a day' is better expressed as 'was supposed to take it once a day' for clarity.

× I have to remember 5 obligatory prayers and water intake in my daily life which I usually forgot so I have. Note an alarm for that purpose.

✓ I have to remember 5 obligatory prayers and water intake in my daily life, which I usually forget, so I set an alarm for that purpose.

The verb 'forgot' should be in present tense 'forget' to match 'usually'. Also, 'Note an alarm' is incorrect; it should be 'set an alarm'.

× I tell you my important and crucial things on note and also set alarm so so I'll get to know about what task I have to do now or what I have to do tomorrow.

✓ I write down my important and crucial things on a note and also set an alarm so that I'll know what tasks I have to do now or tomorrow.

The phrase 'tell you my important and crucial things on note' is incorrect; it should be 'write down'. The repeated 'so so' is an error and should be 'so that'. Also, 'get to know about' is better expressed as 'know'.