Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is natural and clear, but you can improve coherence by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar points.

Exemplo: I'm fairly good at memorizing things, especially facts and numbers, because I create associations or mental images. Although I don't have a photographic memory, these techniques make recalling details easier and more efficient.

Sugestão: Your answer is well-structured and detailed. To improve, you could add a linking word to better connect your experience and the lesson learned.

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. One occasion that stands out was when I forgot to bring an important document to a university interview. It was nerve-wracking; however, it taught me the importance of double-checking everything in advance. Since then, I've become much more organized.

Sugestão: Your answer is informative but contains a small error ('repaying replying'). Also, use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly and avoid minor redundancy.

Exemplo: In my daily routine, I need to remember deadlines, appointments, and small but essential tasks like paying bills or replying to emails. Additionally, I keep track of personal goals such as exercising regularly and maintaining a balanced diet. Although forgetting these isn't disastrous, staying consistent makes a big difference in the long run.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains unclear phrasing ('make absolute fear') which affects clarity. Also, use linking words to connect ideas and avoid minor grammar mistakes.

Exemplo: I usually rely on digital reminders on my phone because they are convenient and reliable. At the same time, I like writing things down in a notebook since physically noting tasks helps reinforce my memory. By combining both methods, I ensure I don't overlook anything important.

× In my daily routine, I need to remember deadlines, appointments and small but essential things like paying bills or repaying replying to emails.

✓ In my daily routine, I need to remember deadlines, appointments and small but essential things like paying bills or replying to emails.

The phrase 'repaying replying to emails' contains an incorrect verb form 'repaying' which is unnecessary and incorrect in this context. The correct verb form is 'replying' which is the gerund form used after 'like'. Remove 'repaying' to correct the sentence.

× I combine both methods to make absolute fear.

✓ I combine both methods to make absolutely sure.

The phrase 'make absolute fear' is incorrect and does not convey the intended meaning. The correct phrase is 'make absolutely sure', which means to ensure something. 'Absolutely' is an adverb modifying 'sure'. This correction fixes the sentence structure and meaning.