Memory— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidato
Personally, I am quite good at memorizing things, especially names and faces. For example, when I visit a new place or meet with new people, I find it very useful to remember their names and faces because it helps me feel more comfortable.
Examinador
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidato
Yes, I have forgotten something important in the past. For example, I got I forgot to submit a school assignment when I was a kid because I was very busy with a lot of projects to do with my team. I think when people have many tasks to do every day, it can be different.
Examinador
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidato
I have a lot of projects to do weekly or daily life because when you need to do something, I always recognize myself To Do List of the things to be very important on the first on and the second list, so I put it on the top.
Examinador
How do you remember important things?
Candidato
In my daily life, I need to remember many tasks and projects and I have to deal with a lot of things to do daily to manage everything to be on time. I have always make To Do List and prioritize the most important tasks on the top.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
Pontuação: 85.0Sugestão: คำตอบของคุณดีมากที่แสดงความเห็นและยกตัวอย่าง แต่ควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคลื่นไหลและเชื่อมโยงกันมากขึ้น เช่น การใช้ 'because' หรือ 'so' เพื่ออธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจน และควรหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อน เช่น 'new place' และ 'new people' ที่อาจทำให้ฟังดูซ้ำซาก
Exemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things, especially names and faces, because remembering them helps me feel more comfortable when I meet new people or visit unfamiliar places.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: คำตอบมีเนื้อหาที่ดีแต่มีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์และความชัดเจน เช่น 'I got I forgot' ควรแก้ไขให้ถูกต้อง และควรใช้คำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงเหตุผล นอกจากนี้ควรอธิบายรายละเอียดให้ชัดเจนและลื่นไหลมากขึ้น
Exemplo: Yes, I once forgot to submit a school assignment because I was very busy with many team projects. This taught me that when people have too many tasks, it's easy to forget important things.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: คำตอบนี้มีความสับสนและไม่ชัดเจน ควรปรับปรุงโครงสร้างประโยคให้ตรงประเด็นและลื่นไหลมากขึ้น รวมถึงใช้คำเชื่อมและคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมเพื่ออธิบายสิ่งที่ต้องจำในชีวิตประจำวันอย่างชัดเจน
Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember many tasks, so I always make a To-Do List and prioritize the most important ones at the top to stay organized.
How do you remember important things?
Pontuação: 80.0Sugestão: คำตอบมีเนื้อหาที่ดีแต่ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์ เช่น 'I have always make' ควรเป็น 'I always make' และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคลื่นไหล นอกจากนี้ควรหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อนและเพิ่มรายละเอียดเพื่อความชัดเจน
Exemplo: To remember important things, I always make a To-Do List and prioritize the most urgent tasks at the top, which helps me manage my time effectively.
Gramática
× I got I forgot to submit a school assignment when I was a kid because I was very busy with a lot of projects to do with my team.
✓ I forgot to submit a school assignment when I was a kid because I was very busy with a lot of projects to do with my team.
The phrase 'I got I forgot' is incorrect and redundant. The correct past tense form is 'I forgot'. Remove 'I got' to fix the sentence.
× I think when people have many tasks to do every day, it can be different.
✓ I think when people have many tasks to do every day, it can be difficult.
The phrase 'it can be different' is unclear and does not fit the context. The intended meaning is likely 'it can be difficult'. Changing 'different' to 'difficult' corrects the sentence meaning and structure.
× I have a lot of projects to do weekly or daily life because when you need to do something, I always recognize myself To Do List of the things to be very important on the first on and the second list, so I put it on the top.
✓ I have a lot of projects to do weekly or daily, so I always make a To Do List to recognize the most important tasks first and put them at the top.
The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper structure. It mixes ideas and has unclear phrases like 'recognize myself To Do List'. The correction clarifies the meaning and improves sentence flow.
× I have always make To Do List and prioritize the most important tasks on the top.
✓ I always make a To Do List and prioritize the most important tasks at the top.
The phrase 'have always make' is incorrect; it should be 'always make' or 'have always made'. Also, 'on the top' should be 'at the top'. The correction fixes verb form and preposition usage.
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