Part 1
Examinador
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidato
To be honest, I have a decent memory, but it depends on the situations. For example, I'm good at remembering numbers such as phone numbers or dates, but I always forget people's name.
Examinador
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidato
Yes, just last week I forgot my phone in a taxi but luckily the drivers found it and returned it for me. So now I double check the seat whenever I get out of a car.
Examinador
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidato
To be honest I have lot of things to remember in their life. The first things is my school assignments and tasks. Also I need to remember the school so I can attend lessons on time.
Examinador
How do you remember important things?
Candidato
Where I usually remember important things by making plans on my phone because it's very time serving and useful. For example, I can finish my assignments or tasks 1 by 1 without forgetting anything that's really work.
Are you good at memorising things?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: 回答时应避免语法错误,如“people's name”应为“people's names”,并且可以更自然地表达记忆的情况。建议使用更连贯的句子结构,避免重复。
Exemplo: I have a fairly good memory, especially for numbers like phone numbers and dates. However, I often struggle to remember people's names, which can be quite embarrassing.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Pontuação: 80.0Sugestão: 回答内容具体且连贯,但“drivers”应为单数“driver”,且可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。
Exemplo: Yes, just last week I forgot my phone in a taxi. Fortunately, the driver found it and returned it to me. Since then, I always double-check the seat before leaving any vehicle.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误,如“have lot of things”应为“have a lot of things”,“in their life”应为“in my daily life”。句子结构不够清晰,建议简化并明确表达。
Exemplo: I have many things to remember in my daily life. The most important are my school assignments and tasks. I also need to remember my class schedule to attend lessons on time.
How do you remember important things?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答中有语法和表达错误,如“Where I usually remember”不自然,应改为“I usually remember”。“time serving”应为“time-saving”。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构。
Exemplo: I usually remember important things by making plans on my phone because it's very time-saving and useful. For example, I can complete my assignments one by one without forgetting anything, which really works well.
× I always forget people's name.
✓ I always forget people's names.
这里的“people's name”指的是多个人的名字,应该使用复数形式“names”。中文解释:这里需要用复数形式,因为“people's”表示多个人,名字也应该是复数。
× I have lot of things to remember in their life.
✓ I have a lot of things to remember in my life.
“lot”前面需要加冠词“a”,且“their life”应改为“my life”以保持主语一致。中文解释:英文中“a lot of”是固定搭配,缺少冠词“a”是错误;另外,句子主语是“I”,所以应该用“my life”而不是“their life”。
× The first things is my school assignments and tasks.
✓ The first thing is my school assignments and tasks.
“The first things”应为单数形式“the first thing”,因为后面接的是单一的第一项。中文解释:这里指的是第一件事,应该用单数形式“thing”,而不是复数“things”。
× Also I need to remember the school so I can attend lessons on time.
✓ Also I need to remember to go to school so I can attend lessons on time.
“remember the school”表达不准确,应为“remember to go to school”。中文解释:动词“remember”后面通常接动词不定式表示记得去做某事,这里需要补充“to go”表示记得去学校。
× it's very time serving and useful.
✓ it's very time-saving and useful.
“time serving”应为“time-saving”,表示节省时间的。中文解释:正确的形容词搭配是“time-saving”,表示节省时间的,原句中词序错误。
× I can finish my assignments or tasks 1 by 1 without forgetting anything that's really work.
✓ I can finish my assignments or tasks one by one without forgetting anything; that really works.
“1 by 1”应写为“one by one”,且“that's really work”应为“that really works”。中文解释:“one by one”是固定表达,数字写成单词更正式;“work”作为动词时第三人称单数应加-s。
× luckily the drivers found it and returned it for me.
✓ luckily the driver found it and returned it for me.
“drivers”应为单数“driver”,因为通常一辆出租车只有一名司机。中文解释:这里指的是一名司机,应该用单数形式。
× Where I usually remember important things by making plans on my phone because it's very time serving and useful.
✓ I usually remember important things by making plans on my phone because it's very time-saving and useful.
句首的“Where”多余,导致句子结构错误,应去掉。中文解释:句子开头的“Where”没有必要,去掉后句子结构完整。