Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi thiếu tự nhiên và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích thêm nếu cần. Hãy tránh dùng các cụm từ như "I'm not sure about it that I can tell typically" vì nó không tự nhiên và gây khó hiểu.

Exemplo: I think my ability to memorise things depends on the situation and how important the information is to me. For example, I can easily remember important dates but sometimes forget trivial details.

Sugestão: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và chi tiết hỗ trợ. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên chú ý đến cách dùng từ và ngữ pháp, ví dụ như "quiet disappoint" nên là "quite disappointing" và "pre prepared" nên là "prepared". Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I once forgot about an important school competition because I didn't check the schedule carefully. As a result, I missed the event, which was quite disappointing since I had prepared a lot.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có nội dung tốt nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp như "it become" nên là "it has become" và "helped me stay discipline" nên là "helps me stay disciplined". Bạn cũng nên sử dụng liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy hơn.

Exemplo: I have many things to remember daily, so it has become a habit. For example, I always follow my skincare routine at night to keep my skin healthy, and I stick to my workout schedule to maintain my overall fitness. These routines help me stay disciplined.

Sugestão: Bạn trả lời rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt. Tuy nhiên, câu cuối "Technology really help me" nên là "Technology really helps me" để đúng ngữ pháp. Bạn cũng có thể thêm một vài từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: When I need to remember something important, I usually write it down on my phone or use a reminder app. This method is very convenient because the app alerts me at the right time, so I don't have to worry about forgetting. Therefore, technology really helps me stay organized.

× I'm not sure about it that I can tell typically, but I think it depends on circumstance and how important it is.

✓ I'm not sure if I can answer that typically, but I think it depends on the circumstances and how important it is.

The original sentence has awkward structure and missing articles. 'about it that I can tell typically' is unclear and should be 'if I can answer that typically'. 'circumstance' should be plural 'circumstances' because it refers to general situations. Adding 'the' before 'circumstances' is necessary as it refers to specific known situations.

× It was a quiet disappoint because I had pre prepared a lot.

✓ It was quite disappointing because I had prepared a lot.

'quiet' is a misspelling of 'quite'. 'disappoint' is a verb, but here an adjective is needed, so 'disappointing' is correct. 'pre prepared' is redundant; 'prepared' alone is sufficient. The past perfect 'had prepared' is correct to indicate the action before the event.

× I have so many things to remember every day that it become a habit for me.

✓ I have so many things to remember every day that it becomes a habit for me.

The verb 'become' should agree with the singular subject 'it', so it should be 'becomes'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× This routine helped me stay discipline.

✓ This routine helped me stay disciplined.

'Discipline' is a noun, but here an adjective is needed to describe 'me'. The correct adjective form is 'disciplined'.

× Technology really help me.

✓ Technology really helps me.

The subject 'Technology' is singular, so the verb should be in third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the subject.