Memory— Part 1 Relatório
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Part 1
Examinador
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidato
Well it really depends on the type of information. For example, when we talk about the movies or the films, I am quietly interested in them and I can remember all the details in each stories. But when it comes to the one that difficult for me like.
Examinador
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidato
Yes, for sure. I often forget important things, you know, my mom usually reminds me of my test before she goes to work, but unfortunately I tend to forget them just a few minutes later. This happened because I'm not very good at remembering details, so I always.
Examinador
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidato
Lots of thing, but recently the most thing that I have to remember is that the new work from my excitement, the teachers only make a quizlet in the website and they forced me to remember all of them.
Examinador
How do you remember important things?
Candidato
I usually take notes the important things on my and I set a time that makes the phones remind me when I need to do this test and this really helped me a loss and I can miss them.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và đầy đủ hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm sai (ví dụ: "quietly" nên là "quite"), đồng thời hoàn thành ý tưởng của mình. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp lại từ không cần thiết.
Exemplo: It depends on the type of information. For example, I am quite interested in movies, so I can remember many details from the stories. However, I find it difficult to memorise other types of information.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: Bạn nên hoàn thành câu trả lời và tránh để câu bị dang dở. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lặp từ quá nhiều.
Exemplo: Yes, I often forget important things. For example, my mom reminds me about my tests before she goes to work, but unfortunately, I tend to forget them a few minutes later because I'm not very good at remembering details.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề, sau đó giải thích rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh câu phức tạp không cần thiết.
Exemplo: I need to remember many things in my daily life. Recently, I have to memorise new vocabulary from Quizlet because my teachers require me to learn all of them.
How do you remember important things?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: Bạn nên nói rõ hơn về cách bạn ghi chú và sử dụng thiết bị nhắc nhở. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "a loss" (có thể bạn muốn nói "a lot"). Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và mạch lạc.
Exemplo: I usually take notes of important things and set reminders on my phone. This method helps me a lot so I don't forget my tests.
Gramática
× I am quietly interested in them and I can remember all the details in each stories.
✓ I am quite interested in them and I can remember all the details in each story.
The adverb 'quietly' is incorrect here; the correct adverb is 'quite' to express degree. Also, 'stories' should be singular 'story' because of 'each' which refers to individual items.
× I can remember all the details in each stories.
✓ I can remember all the details in each story.
'Each' is followed by a singular noun, so 'stories' should be 'story'.
× But when it comes to the one that difficult for me like.
✓ But when it comes to the ones that are difficult for me, like...
The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb. 'One' should be plural 'ones' to match 'that are difficult'. The verb 'are' is needed for correct sentence structure.
× This happened because I'm not very good at remembering details, so I always.
✓ This happens because I'm not very good at remembering details, so I always...
The tense should be present 'happens' to match the ongoing situation. The sentence is incomplete and needs completion.
× Lots of thing, but recently the most thing that I have to remember is that the new work from my excitement, the teachers only make a quizlet in the website and they forced me to remember all of them.
✓ Lots of things, but recently the most important thing that I have to remember is the new work from my excitement. The teachers only make a Quizlet on the website and they force me to remember all of them.
'Thing' should be plural 'things' after 'lots of'. 'Most thing' should be 'most important thing' for clarity. 'Make a quizlet in the website' should be 'make a Quizlet on the website'. 'Forced' should be present tense 'force' to match the present context.
× I usually take notes the important things on my and I set a time that makes the phones remind me when I need to do this test and this really helped me a loss and I can miss them.
✓ I usually take notes of the important things and I set a time that makes the phone remind me when I need to do this test. This really helps me a lot and I don't miss them.
'Take notes the important things' should be 'take notes of the important things'. 'On my' is incomplete and removed. 'Phones' should be singular 'phone' as it refers to one device. 'Helped me a loss' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'helps me a lot'. 'Can miss them' should be 'don't miss them' to express the intended meaning.
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