Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中时态使用不准确，且表达不够自然流畅。建议使用正确的时态，并简洁明了地表达观点，同时避免重复。

Exemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially people's names and important numbers. However, I sometimes struggle to remember specific details.

Sugestão: 回答不够连贯，表达含糊且有语法错误。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用具体例子支持观点。

Exemplo: I rarely forget important things because I always keep a mental reminder or use my phone to alert me about important tasks.

Sugestão: 回答结构较好，但表达有些重复和语法错误。建议简化句子，使用连词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember my work and study tasks by writing a To-Do List, so I don't miss any important events or deadlines. Besides that, I also try to remember small daily details.

Sugestão: 回答内容具体，但表达稍显重复且语法不够准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子结构。

Exemplo: To remember important things, I usually make a To-Do List and set alarms on my phone to remind me of deadlines or appointments.

× When I was young, I think I am a good memorizer, especially for those people's name who I know and the numbers of some certain things, but I'm not very good at memorizing the specific details of stuff.

✓ When I was young, I thought I was a good memorizer, especially for the names of people I know and the numbers of certain things, but I'm not very good at memorizing the specific details of stuff.

句子中描述过去的情况时，时态应使用过去时，因此将“think I am”改为“thought I was”。另外，“those people's name who I know”结构不正确，应改为“the names of people I know”。

× When I was young, I think I am a good memorizer, especially for those people's name who I know and the numbers of some certain things, but I'm not very good at memorizing the specific details of stuff.

✓ When I was young, I thought I was a good memorizer, especially for the names of people I know and the numbers of certain things, but I'm not very good at memorizing the specific details of stuff.

“people's name”中“name”应为复数形式“names”，因为指的是多个人的名字。

× Well, actually I seldom forget something important in my life. I think it sounds like there is a clock in my brain like a mammal, that it will always remind me of something important to do because I will have a lot of.

✓ Well, actually I seldom forget anything important in my life. I think it feels like there is a clock in my brain, like a mammal's, that always reminds me of important things to do because I have a lot of them.

句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。“something important”改为“anything important”更符合否定句表达；“sounds like”改为“feels like”更合适；“like a mammal”应改为“like a mammal's”表示“像哺乳动物的钟”；“because I will have a lot of”不完整，补充“of them”。

× While in my daily life, the most important thing is to write down my To Do List regarding my work or study so that I would miss any important events to or task to finish.

✓ In my daily life, the most important thing is to write down my To Do List regarding my work or study so that I would not miss any important events or tasks to finish.

“While in my daily life”中的“While”用法不当，应去掉；“so that I would miss”应为“so that I would not miss”，表示目的；“events to or task to finish”结构错误，应改为“events or tasks to finish”。

× While in my daily life, the most important thing is to write down my To Do List regarding my work or study so that I would miss any important events to or task to finish. And there are also a lot of trivials I need to remember.

✓ In my daily life, the most important thing is to write down my To Do List regarding my work or study so that I would not miss any important events or tasks to finish. And there are also a lot of trivial things I need to remember.

“trivials”不是正确的复数形式，应改为“trivial things”表示琐事。

× While to remember important things in my life, a very efficient way is to make A to do list and I will also set an alarm if there is anything connected to that line or something so that I would not miss the important time of it.

✓ To remember important things in my life, a very efficient way is to make a to-do list and I also set an alarm if there is anything related to it so that I will not miss the important time.

“While to remember”用法错误，应直接用“To remember”；“make A to do list”中“A”应小写且连字符缺失，应为“a to-do list”；“connected to that line or something”表达不清，应改为“related to it”；“would not miss”改为“will not miss”更符合一般现在时描述习惯。