Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答不完整且表达不流畅，缺少连贯性和具体细节。建议练习完整表达观点，避免句子中断，并使用连接词使回答更自然。

Exemplo: Actually, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, while preparing for my teaching test, I sometimes forget important points because I don't write them down immediately.

Sugestão: 回答中断且缺乏具体细节，表达不连贯。建议完整表达原因和具体例子，使用连接词使回答更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things sometimes because I'm not good at memorising. For instance, recently I almost forgot about a planned hiking trip because I didn't write it down.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺少具体细节和连贯性。建议明确列出需要记住的事项，并用连接词组织语言。

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember my teaching schedule, including which classroom I should go to for the first class, and also my weekend plans.

Sugestão: 回答表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议使用完整句子，清晰描述记忆方法，并使用连接词使回答连贯。

Exemplo: I usually make a schedule and write down important tasks. Every morning, I check my schedule, and after finishing each task, I mark it as done.

× Actually, I'm not good at memorizing things. For example, now I'm preparing my teaching test, but sometimes when I want to. Write down something but I.

✓ Actually, I'm not good at memorizing things. For example, now I'm preparing for my teaching test, but sometimes when I want to write down something, I can't.

原句句子结构混乱，断句不完整，导致表达不清晰。建议将断句合并，补充缺失部分，使句子完整通顺。

× Yes, sometimes I have forgotten something important. Because I think I'm not really good at memorizing things such as recently I need to, I need to go hiking.

✓ Yes, sometimes I have forgotten something important because I think I'm not really good at memorizing things. For example, recently I needed to go hiking.

原句中“Because”引导的从句不应单独成句，且后半句结构混乱。建议将句子合并，调整语序，使表达更连贯。

× In my daily life I need to remember my teaching schedule and the planned at weekends, such as the first class I need to go to, which classroom and after the class I need.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember my teaching schedule and the plans for weekends, such as which classroom I need to go to for the first class and what I need to do after the class.

原句缺少部分内容，句子结构不完整，导致意思不明确。建议补充缺失信息，调整句子结构，使表达完整。

× I think it's a practical way to make my own schedule, write down the important things I need to do and if I get up early I will check out my schedule and if I finish it I will take it then this May.

✓ I think it's practical to make my own schedule and write down the important things I need to do. If I get up early, I will check my schedule, and if I finish it, I will take a break then this May.

原句连接词使用不当，句子过长且逻辑不清晰。建议拆分句子，合理使用连接词，使表达更清楚。