Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. Use correct verb tenses and avoid repeating phrases unnecessarily. Also, provide a more direct response with supporting details using linking words.

Exemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things because I often forget where I put them. For example, last night I couldn't find my pen, so I asked my sister, and she helped me locate it.

Sugestão: Your answer needs clearer structure and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, be specific about the situation and use past tense correctly.

Exemplo: Yes, I have. Once, I forgot where I put my phone. I looked around and asked my sisters to help me find it, but actually, my phone was on the table the whole time.

Sugestão: Your answer covers the main points but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to organize your ideas and improve sentence structure. Also, choose more natural expressions and correct comparative forms.

Exemplo: First of all, I need to remember my phone because I use it to take notes. Secondly, I need my books since I carry them every day to write important information. However, if I have to choose, I prefer using my phone because it is easier to use.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words for coherence. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid awkward phrasing.

Exemplo: I always bring my notebook to write down important activities I need to do during the day. However, if I forget my notebook, I use my phone to write notes and set reminders to help me remember.

× No, I'm not, because I am a person who always forget where the last time I put my things.

✓ No, I'm not, because I am a person who always forgets where I last put my things.

The verb 'forget' should be in the third person singular present tense 'forgets' to agree with the singular subject 'I am a person who'. Also, the phrase 'where the last time I put my things' is awkward; it is clearer to say 'where I last put my things.'

× For example, last night I forget to put where the last time I put my pen and I asked my sister and I got it.

✓ For example, last night I forgot where I last put my pen, so I asked my sister and I found it.

The verb 'forget' should be in the past tense 'forgot' to match the past time reference 'last night.' The phrase 'to put where the last time I put my pen' is incorrect; it should be 'forgot where I last put my pen.' Also, 'I got it' is better expressed as 'I found it' in this context.

× Yes I have at the time I forget where I put my phone and I tried to look around me and I tried to ask my sisters to to find it but in the fact my my phone on the table.

✓ Yes, I have. At that time, I forgot where I put my phone. I tried to look around me and asked my sisters to find it, but in fact, my phone was on the table.

The verb 'forget' should be in past tense 'forgot' to match the past event. The phrase 'to to find it' has a repeated word and should be corrected to 'to find it.' 'In the fact' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'in fact.' Also, 'my my phone' is a repetition error. The verb 'was' is needed to complete the sentence 'my phone was on the table.'

× First thing first, I need my phone because I always write something on my notes to keep remembering me.

✓ First things first, I need my phone because I always write something in my notes to help me remember.

The phrase 'First thing first' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'First things first.' The preposition 'on' should be 'in' when referring to writing in notes. 'To keep remembering me' is awkward; 'to help me remember' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× The second I need my books because I always bring it every day to write something important.

✓ Second, I need my books because I always bring them every day to write something important.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to plural 'books'; it should be 'them.' Also, 'The second' is better as 'Second' in this context.

× But if I can choose, I always use my phone because my phone is more easier.

✓ But if I can choose, I always use my phone because my phone is easier.

The phrase 'more easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already a comparative adjective; 'more' is unnecessary and redundant.

× I always bring my notebook and write down the important activities should I do in the day, but sometimes when I don't bring it I write on my phone and set reminder to keep me remembering it.

✓ I always bring my notebook and write down the important activities I should do during the day, but sometimes when I don't bring it, I write on my phone and set reminders to help me remember them.

The phrase 'should I do in the day' is awkward; 'I should do during the day' is clearer. 'Set reminder' should be plural 'set reminders' if referring to multiple tasks. 'Keep me remembering it' is incorrect; 'help me remember them' is the correct expression. Also, 'write on my phone' is acceptable but 'write in my phone' is less common; 'write on my phone' is fine here.