Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构不完整。建议加强时态和主谓一致的使用，避免重复表达，并且用更自然的方式描述情绪对记忆的影响。

Exemplo: It depends on my mood. For instance, when I perform well in exams, I can memorize things quickly and effectively. However, if I feel anxious or upset, it's harder for me to remember things.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误，如动词时态和拼写错误，且表达略显重复。建议注意动词形式，使用更准确的词汇，并且使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, when I'm in a hurry, I often forget important things. For example, I sometimes leave my house without my keys and end up locked outside.

Sugestão: 回答中句子结构混乱，表达不够清晰。建议理清句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅，并且具体说明需要记住的内容。

Exemplo: I need to remember my work and study schedule because they are important. Also, I try to remember special occasions like my friends' birthdays or ceremonies so I can attend them.

Sugestão: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法错误和用词不当。建议注意冠词和介词的使用，句子更简洁自然。

Exemplo: Usually, I try to remember things in my mind. However, for important tasks, I write them down on paper or use my phone to set reminders so I don't forget.

× if I done my examination very well, I can memorize things very quickly and have a good quality in them.

✓ if I do my examination very well, I can memorize things very quickly and have good quality in them.

这里使用了过去分词'done'，但句子表达的是条件和结果的关系，应该用一般现在时'do'。因为条件句中通常用一般现在时表示将来或习惯性的动作。

× But sometimes if you have bad things that it makes me very sad.

✓ But sometimes if I have bad things, it makes me very sad.

句中主语不一致，前半句用'you'，后半句用'me'，应保持主语一致，改为'I'。

× Well, when I'm doing things very quickly, it is easy for me to forgot things.

✓ Well, when I'm doing things very quickly, it is easy for me to forget things.

'forgot'是过去式，句中应使用动词不定式'forget'，表示习惯或一般事实。

× when I was living home in a hurry, I always forgot to take the key from home, so I always locked outside the door when I was backing home.

✓ when I was leaving home in a hurry, I always forgot to take the key from home, so I was always locked outside the door when I was coming back home.

'living home'应为'leaving home'表示离开家；'backing home'应为'coming back home'表示回家。

× so I always locked outside the door when I was backing home.

✓ so I was always locked outside the door when I was coming back home.

'locked outside the door'应为'locked out of the door'或'locked outside the door'，这里保持原意，调整语序更自然。

× I need to remember the important days that when my friends for example like birthday or ceremony I need to attend when my friends or classmates.

✓ I need to remember the important days, for example, my friends' birthdays or ceremonies that I need to attend.

句子结构混乱，代词使用不当，需调整句子顺序和代词，使表达清晰。

× I write down in a paper or use mobile phone to record the things in advance to make sure I can't forget about it.

✓ I write things down on a paper or use my mobile phone to record them in advance to make sure I don't forget them.

'write down in a paper'应为'write down on a paper'；'use mobile phone'应加冠词或物主代词；'can't forget about it'应为'don't forget them'，更符合英语习惯。