Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中存在较多的语气词“uh”，影响流畅性。建议减少重复和犹豫词汇，回答时结构更清晰，表达更自然。可以先直接回答问题，再简要说明原因。

Exemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things because I find it tiring to keep a lot of information in my mind. Therefore, I prefer to act immediately once I remember something.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误，如“to looking for it”应为“looking for it”。建议注意语法准确性，减少语气词，回答时结构更完整，细节更具体。

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten something important. For example, I once missed a spoken English class because my pencil was stolen, and I spent a lot of time looking for it. This made me feel very frustrated.

Sugestão: 回答不完整，句子结构不完整且有语法错误。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词丰富内容，避免句子中断。

Exemplo: The most important thing I need to remember is to finish my assignments on time because it helps me achieve good grades in accounting. Besides that, I also need to remember appointments and meetings.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和句子不完整，如“Beside that I if it's a long term schedule...”。建议注意句子完整性和语法准确，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: I usually use my smartphone to remind me of important tasks so I don't forget them. Besides that, if it's a long-term schedule or something very important, I write it down to keep track of it.

× while I don't have a good command of memorizing things because I don't like to, uh, remember lots of things or information in my mind

✓ while I don't have a good command of memorization because I don't like to, uh, remember lots of things or information in my mind

动名词（memorizing）在这里用作名词时，应该用名词形式memorization。动名词和名词的用法不同，需区分。

× This made me feel uh, very frustrated.

✓ This made me feel very frustrated.

句中“uh”是口语填充词，不属于语法错误，但在书面表达中应去除以使句子更流畅。

× The most important thing is I need to remember finish my assignment on time because it's very important for me to get a perfect score in my field of accounting.

✓ The most important thing is that I need to remember to finish my assignment on time because it's very important for me to get a perfect score in my field of accounting.

句子缺少连接词that，且动词remember后应接不定式to finish，保证句子结构完整。

× I once missed a spoken English uh because I realized my pencil was stolen and I spent a lot of time to looking for it.

✓ I once missed a spoken English test because I realized my pencil was stolen and I spent a lot of time looking for it.

动词spend后应接动名词形式looking，而不是to looking；此外，缺少名词test使句子完整。

× Beside that I need to remember.

✓ Besides that, I need to remember.

介词beside用法错误，应使用副词besides表示“除此之外”，且后面应加逗号分隔。

× Beside that I if it's a long term schedule or something important I will write them down so that I can.

✓ Besides that, if it's a long-term schedule or something important, I will write it down so that I won't forget.

同样，beside应改为besides；long term应加连字符long-term；句子缺少主语和谓语的完整表达，需补充完整。