Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 예를 들어, 'phone number society'는 의미가 불분명하며, 문장이 다소 중복되고 명확하지 않습니다. 좀 더 명확하고 간결하게 자신의 기억력 상태를 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: I'm not very good at memorizing things nowadays. When I was younger, I could remember things easily, but now I often forget information I just heard, like my family's phone numbers.

Sugestão: 답변에 문법적 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 'I have regarding utility bill due dates'와 'forgotten my wallet to run below'는 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 문장을 명확하고 자연스럽게 재구성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I once missed the due date for a utility bill, and a few times I forgot to bring my wallet when going out. Recently, I forgot the password to my front door and had to call my younger sibling for help.

Sugestão: 답변이 비교적 명확하고 자연스럽지만, 연결어 사용이 부족합니다. 'because' 외에도 다양한 연결어를 사용하여 문장 간 논리적 흐름을 강화하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: There are many things I need to remember daily. For example, I must remember my payday because that's when my bank account balance is highest. Additionally, it's very important to remember my family's birthdays; otherwise, they might feel upset.

Sugestão: 답변이 자연스럽고 내용도 구체적입니다. 다만, 문장 연결을 더 부드럽게 하기 위해 다양한 연결어를 활용하는 연습을 하면 좋겠습니다.

Exemplo: In the past, I used to write notes in my diary. However, since I don't check it often nowadays, I register my schedule on my phone. Then, an alarm sounds either a day or an hour before the event. If something is really important, I share it with people around me or mark it prominently on the calendar.

× Actually, I cannot remember my family's phone number society from my own ones.

✓ Actually, I cannot remember my family's phone number separately from my own.

The phrase 'phone number society from my own ones' is incorrect and unclear. The preposition 'from' is used incorrectly here, and 'society' is misplaced. The intended meaning seems to be that the student cannot remember their family's phone number separately from their own. The correction clarifies this by replacing the phrase with 'separately from my own.'

× For example I have regarding utility bill due dates and I have forgotten my wallet to run below a few times.

✓ For example, I have forgotten utility bill due dates and I have forgotten my wallet a few times when going out.

The phrase 'I have regarding utility bill due dates' is incomplete and incorrect. Also, 'to run below' is an incorrect prepositional phrase. The sentence is corrected to clearly express forgetting utility bill due dates and forgetting the wallet when going out. The prepositions and phrasing are corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.