Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, "I'm not very good at memorising things, but I can remember important information occasionally."

Exemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things, but I can remember important information occasionally, especially when I focus on it carefully.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Use a clear topic sentence and organize your story logically. Avoid filler words and repetition. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'once' to structure your answer.

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten something important once. For example, when I was about to take my UH exam, I forgot to bring my paperboard, which caused me some trouble.

Sugestão: Your answer is too brief and lacks detail. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain your method with supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember various tasks and appointments. Although I don't make lists, I rely on my memory to keep track of important things.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains redundancy and grammatical errors. Use a clear topic sentence and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words to explain your method logically.

Exemplo: To remember important things, I make a list on my mobile phone. Whenever I go shopping, I check the list, which helps me remember what to buy.

× Well, I'm not that much good at memorizing things, but yeah, sometimes I remember some important things, but not that much.

✓ Well, I'm not that good at memorizing things, but yeah, sometimes I remember some important things, but not that much.

The phrase 'that much good' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'that good' to indicate degree. 'Much' is not used before adjectives like 'good' in this context.

× Newly not, but yes.

✓ Not recently, but yes.

The word 'Newly' is incorrectly used here. The correct adverb is 'recently' to indicate a recent time frame in the past.

× I remember one time in once in my life when I was about to give my UH exam, I, I forgot to take my UH, I'm a lefty.

✓ I remember one time in my life when I was about to take my UH exam, I forgot to take my UH paperboard with me; I'm a lefty.

The phrase 'in once in my life' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'give my UH exam' should be 'take my UH exam'. The sentence was fragmented and needed restructuring for clarity.

× I forgot to take my uh paperboard with me. Then I paid.

✓ I forgot to take my paperboard with me. Then I paid the price.

The sentence 'Then I paid.' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'the price' clarifies the consequence. Also, 'uh' is a filler and should be omitted in formal speech.

× Nothing. I don't make any lists or something like that, I just remember things by my own memory.

✓ Nothing. I don't make any lists or anything like that; I just remember things by my own memory.

The phrase 'or something like that' is informal and vague. 'Or anything like that' is more appropriate in this context.

× I just remember things by my own memory.

✓ I just remember things on my own memory.

The correct preposition is 'on' when referring to relying on memory.

× To remember important things, I make a list of them in my mobile and whenever I go out for some groceries or something to buy, I just open that list and that will help me that that helped me in me in memorizing things.

✓ To remember important things, I make a list of them on my mobile, and whenever I go out for groceries or something to buy, I just open that list, and it helps me memorize things.

The sentence has redundant and incorrect conjunctions and phrases like 'that will help me that that helped me in me in'. It needs to be simplified and corrected for clarity and grammar.