Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答雖然直接，但語言表達稍顯口語化且有些重複。建議使用更自然且正式的表達方式，並避免使用"a little bit too lazy"這種不夠精確的描述。

Exemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I tend to be a bit careless when it comes to remembering details.

Sugestão: 回答內容完整，但語法和連接詞使用不夠自然。建議使用更流暢的連接詞如"because"連接句子，並注意語法錯誤，例如"that's thing"應為"that thing"。

Exemplo: Although I'm not good at memorising, I have never forgotten anything important because I always write it down and save it on my phone.

Sugestão: 回答中有語法錯誤和重複詞語，且表達不夠流暢。建議注意主謂一致（"boss need"應為"boss needs"），避免重複詞語，並使用更自然的形容詞如"sensitive"。

Exemplo: I need to remember the tasks my boss assigns to me and my mom's birthday because she is very sensitive about it.

Sugestão: 回答中表達稍顯重複且不夠流暢。建議使用更自然的連接詞和結構，例如"I write it down in my notebook, and for very important things, I also add them to my phone's calendar."

Exemplo: I usually write important things in my notebook, and if they are very important, I also add them to my phone's calendar to make sure I don't forget.

× No, I'm pretty bad at it because I think I'm a little bit too lazy for memorizing.

✓ No, I'm pretty bad at it because I think I'm a little bit too lazy to memorize.

The phrase 'lazy for memorizing' is incorrect because after 'lazy' we use 'to' plus the base verb form, not 'for' plus verb-ing. So it should be 'lazy to memorize'. This is a common collocation in English.

× Because if that's thing is very important, I'll write it down and also record it in my cell phone.

✓ Because if that thing is very important, I'll write it down and also record it in my cell phone.

The phrase 'that's thing' is incorrect; it should be 'that thing'. 'That's' is a contraction of 'that is', which does not fit here. This is a misuse of demonstrative pronouns.

× I have to remember the things that my boss need me to do, and I have to remember my mom's birthday because she she is really. Sensitivity to her birthday.

✓ I have to remember the things that my boss needs me to do, and I have to remember my mom's birthday because she is really sensitive to her birthday.

The verb 'need' should be 'needs' to agree with the singular subject 'my boss'. Also, 'she she is really. Sensitivity' is incorrect; it should be 'she is really sensitive'. 'Sensitive' is the correct adjective form, not 'sensitivity' which is a noun.

× As I said, I will write it down on my notebook and if it's very important I will also record it in my schedule like in cell phone.

✓ As I said, I will write it down in my notebook and if it's very important I will also record it in my schedule, like on my cell phone.

We say 'write it down in my notebook' because 'in' is used for enclosed spaces like notebooks. Also, 'like in cell phone' is incorrect; it should be 'like on my cell phone' because we use 'on' for devices.