Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和表达方式，使回答更流畅自然。

Exemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget important points and keywords when I study for exams.

Sugestão: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并注意时态和句子完整性。

Exemplo: Yes, last week I forgot to bring my key when I went out. When I came back home, I couldn't open the door, so I had to find my mom to help me.

Sugestão: 回答内容重复且缺乏连贯性，句子过长且结构混乱。建议分句表达，使用连接词，并避免重复。

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember the shopping list for the supermarket. Also, on weekends, I have ballet lessons, so I have to remember the dance steps.

Sugestão: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法错误和冗余。建议简化句子，注意介词使用，并避免重复表达。

Exemplo: I write important things in the notes app on my phone so I can check them anytime and anywhere. I also add extra details to help me remember better.

× I think I'm not because when I was studying on my exam I need to very work hard because I always forgot the important things and the main keyword.

✓ I think I'm not because when I was studying for my exam I needed to work very hard because I always forgot the important things and the main keywords.

这里的动作发生在过去，所以动词需要用过去时。'need' 应改为 'needed'，'work hard' 前加副词 'very' 的位置应调整为 'work very hard'，'keyword' 应为复数 'keywords' 因为指多个关键词。

× when I was studying on my exam I need to very work hard

✓ when I was studying for my exam I needed to work very hard

动词 'study' 后面搭配介词应为 'for'，表示为某个考试学习，而不是 'on'。

× because I always forgot the important things and the main keyword.

✓ because I always forgot the important things and the main keywords.

'keyword' 应为复数形式 'keywords'，因为这里指多个关键词。

× Then when I back home, I can't open the door because I forgot to bring the key.

✓ Then when I got back home, I couldn't open the door because I forgot to bring the key.

'back' 前应加过去时态动词 'got'，表示过去动作；'can't' 应改为过去时 'couldn't'，与上下文时间一致。

× I have to go to find my mom and, uh take.

✓ I had to go find my mom and, uh, take it.

这里描述的是过去发生的事情，'have to' 应改为过去时 'had to'。

× I was studying on my exam

✓ I was studying for my exam

动词 'study' 后应使用介词 'for'，表示为某个考试学习。

× I will mark it down on my notes in my mobile so that I can check it as soon as possible in anywhere in anytime and I can also mark some extra detail on my notes also.

✓ I will mark it down in my notes on my mobile so that I can check it as soon as possible anywhere and anytime, and I can also add some extra details to my notes.

'mark down' 后应使用介词 'in' 表示记在笔记里；'in my mobile' 应改为 'on my mobile'；'in anywhere in anytime' 语法错误，应改为 'anywhere and anytime'；'mark some extra detail on my notes' 应改为 'add some extra details to my notes' 更自然。

× I have to remember the dancing step in the ballet lessons and I have to remember.

✓ I have to remember the dancing steps in the ballet lessons.

'step' 应为复数 'steps'，因为舞蹈动作通常有多个步骤。