Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和用词不够准确，且句子结构较为简单。建议注意动词形式和词汇搭配，如将“do good at memory things”改为“am good at memorising things”，并且避免冗长和重复。

Exemplo: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, when I solve math problems, I remember all the formulas in my head and use them quickly to find the answers.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“forgotten”用法不当，且句子不够连贯。建议使用正确时态和更自然的表达方式，同时补充细节使内容更具体。

Exemplo: No, I have never forgotten anything very important. However, sometimes I forget small things, like taking care of my plants or bringing my kids to school.

Sugestão: 回答表达了主要内容，但语法和用词不够准确，且句子结构较为简单。建议使用更自然的表达方式，注意时态和冠词的使用，并丰富细节。

Exemplo: As a student, I need to remember the tasks assigned by my teachers because they are important. Also, I try to keep in mind my parents' advice to study hard.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“write down them”应为“write them down”，且“do them one by 1:00”表达不准确。建议使用更准确的表达和连贯的句子结构。

Exemplo: If something is really important, I make a list and write down the tasks. Then, I complete them one by one to stay organized. That's how I manage important things.

× Yes, As for me I do good at memory things.

✓ Yes, as for me, I am good at memorising things.

这里“do good”用法错误，应该用形容词“good”来描述能力，且动词搭配应为“am good at”。此外，“memory things”表达不自然，应改为“memorising things”。

× For example when I do the calculate question, I will remember all the formula in my head and I could use this formula work out the question as far as fast as I can.

✓ For example, when I do calculation questions, I will remember all the formulas in my head and I can use these formulas to work out the questions as fast as I can.

“calculate question”应为“calculation questions”，且“formula”应为复数“formulas”，因为有多个公式。动词“could”改为“can”更符合语境。

× No, actually I don't forget the thing which was really significant.

✓ No, actually I don't forget things that are really significant.

时态不一致，描述现在的情况应使用现在时，“was”改为“are”，且“thing”应为复数“things”。

× I do forget something not very important, like I normally forgotten to take kids and water flower these things.

✓ I do forget some unimportant things, like I normally forget to take the kids and water the flowers.

“forgotten”是过去分词，句中应使用一般现在时“forget”。“water flower”应为“water the flowers”，缺少冠词且复数形式。

× As for me, I'm a student, I need to remember the task which teacher order me to do.

✓ As for me, I'm a student. I need to remember the tasks which the teacher orders me to do.

“task”应为复数“tasks”，且“teacher”前应加定冠词“the”。动词“order”应与主语“teacher”保持第三人称单数一致，改为“orders”。

× That was really significant and I still remember the thing my parents want me to do like study hard.

✓ That is really significant and I still remember the things my parents want me to do, like study hard.

描述现在的情况应使用现在时，“was”改为“is”。“thing”应为复数“things”。

× If the things are really important, I will make a list, write down them and do them one by 1:00 so that I can do the things organized.

✓ If the things are really important, I will make a list, write them down and do them one by one so that I can do things in an organized way.

“write down them”应改为“write them down”，动词短语中宾语位置错误。“one by 1:00”应为“one by one”，表达逐个完成。最后一句缺少介词“in”和冠词“an”，且“organized”应为形容词形式。