Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve grammar, for example, use 'I find it difficult to memorise things' instead of 'that was so difficult to me'. Also, clarify your example with better structure and linking words.

Exemplo: I find it difficult to memorise things. For instance, learning a piano song takes me a lot of time because I struggle to remember the notes.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical errors and lacks clarity. Use correct verb tenses and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases like 'But IH'.

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I often forget to bring my ID card when I go out, which causes a lot of trouble.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains errors. Make sure your sentences are clear and relevant. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples. For instance, explain what 'tutor legs' means or replace it with a clearer term.

Exemplo: In daily life, I need to remember to stay organised and manage my time well. For example, I use a planner to keep track of my tasks and avoid forgetting important responsibilities.

Sugestão: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to be more concise and clear. Use linking words to explain how your phone helps you remember important things, and avoid unclear phrases like 'remind edit a link'.

Exemplo: I use my phone to help me remember important things. For example, I set reminders and alarms, which ensure I don't forget tasks or appointments.

× No, I'm not good at memorizing things because that was so difficult to me.

✓ No, I'm not good at memorizing things because that is so difficult for me.

The sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'was' when referring to a general or current difficulty, which requires the present tense 'is'. Also, the preposition 'to' is incorrect here; 'for' is the correct preposition to express difficulty experienced by someone.

× For example, if I have to remember a song with a piano that it will cost me a lot of time to remember it.

✓ For example, if I have to remember a song with piano, it will take me a lot of time to remember it.

The sentence has redundant and awkward phrasing. 'That it will cost me' is incorrect; 'it will take me' is the correct expression for time consumption. Also, 'a piano' is unnecessary here; 'with piano' or 'with piano accompaniment' is more natural.

× Yes, I usually forgotten something important such that I have to take the tickets and if I was going out and I always forget to carry my ID card and it will make much trouble for me.

✓ Yes, I usually forget something important, such as having to take tickets when I go out, and I always forget to carry my ID card, which causes me a lot of trouble.

The verb 'forgotten' is a past participle and incorrectly used here; the simple present 'forget' fits better with 'usually'. The sentence is also run-on and unclear; restructuring improves clarity and tense consistency.

× But IH.

✓ But I H.

The sentence 'But IH.' is incomplete and unclear. Possibly a typo or incomplete thought; it should be clarified or removed.

× In daily life, it's important to remember to stay organized and manage time efficiently.

✓ In daily life, it's important to remember to stay organised and manage time efficiently.

No grammatical error here, but 'organised' is the British English spelling, which fits the context better.

× For example, keep a tutor legs help me provide side checks and avoid forgetting important responsibilities additionally.

✓ For example, keeping a to-do list helps me check tasks and avoid forgetting important responsibilities.

The original sentence is unclear and contains nonsensical phrases like 'tutor legs' and 'provide side checks'. Rewriting for clarity and correct vocabulary is necessary.

× I always use the phone that helps me reminders the important things if I have to.

✓ I always use my phone to remind me of important things when I have to.

'Reminders' is a noun, but the sentence requires the verb 'remind'. Also, 'the phone' should be 'my phone' to indicate possession. The phrase 'if I have to' is better expressed as 'when I have to'.

× If there was something important have to remember, I will remind edit a link in my phone that I can remember that it worked with the phone.

✓ If there is something important to remember, I will create a reminder or save a link on my phone so I can remember it; it works well for me.

The sentence is grammatically incorrect and confusing. 'If there was' should be 'If there is' for present/future context. 'Remind edit a link' is incorrect; 'create a reminder or save a link' is clearer. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× It helped me a lot.

✓ It helps me a lot.

Since the context is about a habitual action or current method, present tense 'helps' is more appropriate than past tense 'helped'.