Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors which affect naturalness. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence, followed by supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

Exemplo: To be honest, I am not very good at memorising things nowadays because I often forget them. Therefore, I make plans, set reminders, and sometimes write notes on my phone. However, when I was younger, I had a very good memory and could remember many things easily.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence and explain your methods to avoid forgetting important things using linking words. Use correct verb forms and pluralisation.

Exemplo: I have never forgotten anything important because I often feel stressed and anxious about it. To prevent forgetting, I make sure to memorise important information carefully and use reminders when necessary.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete. Try to organise your ideas clearly with linking words and complete your sentences. Be specific about what you need to remember and how you manage it.

Exemplo: Since I work as a nurse, I need to remember many details about my patients. For example, each patient has specific tests and medications that I must keep track of. To manage this, I make notes and refer to them regularly during my work.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many repetitions and incomplete sentences. Try to express your ideas clearly and concisely, using linking words to explain your methods for remembering important things.

Exemplo: To remember important things, I often repeat them to myself, especially at night before sleeping. Additionally, I sometimes set reminders on my phone to make sure I don't forget.

× To be honest nowadays I have a memory like I see, I always forget lots of things so I have to make plans and also I have to set reminder and sometimes I write it on my cell phones.

✓ To be honest, nowadays I have a memory like a sieve, I always forget lots of things so I have to make plans and also I have to set reminders and sometimes I write them on my cell phone.

The phrase 'memory like I see' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'memory like a sieve', meaning poor memory. 'Reminder' should be plural 'reminders' because it refers to multiple instances. 'Cell phones' should be singular 'cell phone' as the speaker likely refers to their own device. Also, 'write it' should be 'write them' to agree with the plural 'things'.

× And when I was younger I have AI had a memory like an elephant so I could memorize lots of things.

✓ And when I was younger, I had a memory like an elephant so I could memorize lots of things.

The phrase 'I have AI had' is incorrect and redundant. The correct past tense form is 'I had'. This matches the past time reference 'when I was younger'.

× No, I never forget lots of important thing because I get lots of stress and anxiety.

✓ No, I never forget lots of important things because I get lots of stress and anxiety.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' to agree with 'lots of', which indicates multiple items.

× So I prevent this situation by memorize them.

✓ So I prevent this situation by memorizing them.

After the preposition 'by', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'memorize' becomes 'memorizing'. This is a common grammatical structure in English.

× Since I work as a nurse, we have lots of patient during our work release and I always go to my workplace on a daily basis and I have to remember the their test.

✓ Since I work as a nurse, we have lots of patients during our work shift and I always go to my workplace on a daily basis and I have to remember their tests.

'Patient' should be plural 'patients' to agree with 'lots of'. 'Work release' is incorrect; the correct term is 'work shift'. 'The their test' is incorrect; 'their tests' is correct to indicate multiple tests belonging to them.

× Each of them has their own specific test and also each of them has their specific medication.

✓ Each of them has their own specific tests and also each of them has their specific medication.

'Test' should be plural 'tests' because 'each of them' refers to multiple individuals, each with multiple tests. 'Medication' can remain singular as it can be uncountable or refer to a set of medicines.

× So I have to remember it. So I make a note and.

✓ So I have to remember them, so I make a note.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'It' should be 'them' to refer to multiple items. The conjunction 'and' at the end is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity.

× Actually, to be honest with you, they always repeating myself and and you know when I get in, when I want to get asleep and at night, I my mind repeats me, repeats me over and over so I don't forget it.

✓ Actually, to be honest with you, I always repeat myself and, you know, when I want to fall asleep at night, my mind repeats things over and over so I don't forget them.

'They always repeating myself' is incorrect; the subject should be 'I' and the verb 'repeat' in present simple. 'Get in' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'fall asleep'. 'I my mind repeats me' is ungrammatical; it should be 'my mind repeats things'. Also, 'repeats me' is incorrect; the mind repeats information, not the person. 'It' should be 'them' to refer to multiple things.

× I sometimes prefer to set reminder and.

✓ I sometimes prefer to set reminders.

'Reminder' should be plural 'reminders' to match the context. The sentence is incomplete with 'and' at the end, so it is removed for clarity.