Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I'm not good at memorising things" instead of "I'm not a good memorizing things." Also, keep your answer concise and clear, using linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: No, I'm not good at memorising things because I have many tasks every day. Therefore, it's hard for me to remember everything, even important details sometimes.

Sugestão: Focus on correct verb forms and sentence structure. Use linking words like "because" to explain reasons clearly. Avoid repeating the same idea unnecessarily.

Exemplo: Yes, I often forget important things. For example, I once forgot I had an exam on the same day, which made me feel stressed because I had many tasks to do.

Sugestão: Be specific and clear. Use proper sentence structure and avoid listing without linking words. For example, use "I need to remember my skin care routine, check my emails, and keep in touch with my friends."

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember my skin care routine, check my emails regularly, and keep in touch with my friends.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and clarity. Explain your method clearly using linking words. For example, say "I usually try to do fewer tasks, so it's easier to remember what I need to do."

Exemplo: I usually try to do fewer tasks in a day, so it's easier to remember the important things I need to do.

× No, I'm not a good memorizing things because I have so many task that I do it every day.

✓ No, I'm not good at memorizing things because I have so many tasks that I do every day.

The phrase 'good memorizing things' is incorrect; it should be 'good at memorizing things' because 'good at' is the correct collocation. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'so many'. The phrase 'that I do it every day' is redundant; 'that I do every day' is correct.

× No, I'm not a good memorizing things because I have so many task that I do it every day.

✓ No, I'm not good at memorizing things because I have so many tasks that I do every day.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because 'so many' requires a plural noun.

× Even when something important happens, I forget the details after sometimes.

✓ Even when something important happens, I forget the details after some time.

The phrase 'after sometimes' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'after some time' to indicate a period has passed.

× Yes, I mostly forgetting the important things.

✓ Yes, I mostly forget important things.

The verb 'forgetting' is incorrectly used here; the simple present 'forget' is correct to express habitual action.

× For example I forget that I have an exam in the same day and this is make me feel stress and this is happen when I have so many things that I should to do in the same day.

✓ For example, I forget that I have an exam on the same day, and this makes me feel stressed. This happens when I have so many things that I should do on the same day.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'this'. 'Feel stress' should be 'feel stressed' to use the correct adjective. 'This is happen' should be 'this happens' for subject-verb agreement and correct tense. 'Should to do' is incorrect; it should be 'should do'. Also, 'in the same day' should be 'on the same day' (preposition correction).

× For example I forget that I have an exam in the same day and this is make me feel stress and this is happen when I have so many things that I should to do in the same day.

✓ For example, I forget that I have an exam on the same day, and this makes me feel stressed. This happens when I have so many things that I should do on the same day.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'day'; the correct preposition is 'on' for specific days.

× In my daily life, I need to remember my skin care routine and check my emails, check my friends and praise.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember my skincare routine, check my emails, check on my friends, and give praise.

The phrase 'check my friends' is unclear; 'check on my friends' is more appropriate. Also, 'praise' as a noun is unclear here; 'give praise' or 'praise others' is better. 'Skin care' is usually written as one word 'skincare'.

× I usually use to do less.

✓ I usually try to do less.

The phrase 'use to do less' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'try to do less' or 'tend to do less' to express habitual action.

× That's make the the things that I should to do in the day easier to remember.

✓ That makes the things I should do during the day easier to remember.

'That's make' should be 'That makes' for subject-verb agreement. 'Should to do' is incorrect; it should be 'should do'. 'In the day' is better expressed as 'during the day'. Also, the repeated 'the the' is a typo.