Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Avoid repeating words like 'inherited' and try to make your sentences more concise and natural. Also, provide a clear example or explanation to support your statement.

Exemplo: Yes, I'm quite good at memorizing things because I inherited this ability from my mom. For example, my classmates often say that once I read something, I can easily write it down from memory.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your thoughts clearly, use proper sentence structure, and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Explain the situation more coherently.

Exemplo: Yes, I often forget important things nowadays because my job is very stressful. Since I have to deal with the public every day, it becomes hard to remember everything clearly.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and repetitive. Make sure to finish your sentences and avoid repeating words like 'schedule'. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain why remembering meeting dates is important.

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember meeting dates because forgetting them often leads to embarrassing situations. For instance, missing a meeting can affect my work performance and relationships with colleagues.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and is somewhat repetitive. Try to use correct verb tenses and complete your thoughts clearly. Explain your method and its limitations.

Exemplo: I remember important things by writing them down on paper. However, sometimes I forget to write them, which causes problems. Therefore, I believe writing is helpful but I need to be more consistent.

× Actually I have inherited inherited this from my mom.

✓ Actually, I have inherited this from my mom.

The word 'inherited' was repeated twice, which is a typographical error. Removing the duplicate corrects the sentence. The present perfect tense 'have inherited' is appropriate here to indicate a past action with present relevance.

× Additionally, my classmates always told me that once I have read, I write all the things.

✓ Additionally, my classmates always told me that once I have read something, I write everything down.

The phrase 'once I have read' is correct in present perfect tense, but 'all the things' is vague and awkward. Changing it to 'everything down' clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure.

× So I'm actually.

✓ So I'm actually good at memorizing things.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a predicate. Completing the sentence clarifies the intended meaning.

× I have forgotten something important is very often nowadays I am in very stressful condition due to my job nature, I have to deal with public everyday.

✓ I have forgotten something important very often nowadays because I am in a very stressful condition due to the nature of my job; I have to deal with the public every day.

The original sentence is a run-on and lacks proper connectors and punctuation. Adding 'because' and proper punctuation improves clarity and sentence structure.

× Uh, that's why I sound very something that is very important I can remember.

✓ Uh, that's why I can't remember some very important things.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect pronoun usage and awkward phrasing. Rephrasing clarifies the meaning and corrects pronoun use.

× In my daily life, I actually need to remember on the meeting date because I have forgotten it regularly and I have to face a very embarrassing situation when I can't remember the meeting schedule schedule.

✓ In my daily life, I actually need to remember the meeting date because I forget it regularly and have to face very embarrassing situations when I can't remember the meeting schedule.

The preposition 'on' is unnecessary before 'the meeting date'. Also, 'schedule schedule' is a repetition error. Removing 'on' and the repeated word corrects the sentence.

× So that's why I think it is very.

✓ So that's why I think it is very important.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object or complement. Adding 'important' completes the thought.

× I remember important things by writing into a paper, but sometimes I forgot to write it and then the problem is arise.

✓ I remember important things by writing them on a paper, but sometimes I forget to write them, and then problems arise.

The preposition 'into' is incorrect here; 'on' is appropriate for writing on paper. Also, verb tenses were inconsistent ('forgot' should be 'forget' to match present tense), and 'problem is arise' is incorrect; it should be 'problems arise'.

× So I think and I and I also believe in writing.

✓ So I think and also believe in writing things down.

The sentence is repetitive and incomplete. Removing the repeated phrase and completing the sentence improves clarity and correctness.