Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of repeating 'sometimes' and 'it's sometimes stressful', you can say 'which can be stressful'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often don't pay enough attention, which can be stressful when I forget appointments or special dates.

Sugestão: Avoid short, incomplete sentences like 'And I did it. And I took the exam at.' Instead, combine sentences for clarity and completeness. Use linking words to show cause and effect.

Exemplo: Yes, I once forgot the exact timing of my final exam, which was stressful. However, since I was well prepared, I convinced the doctor to let me take a makeup exam, and I successfully completed it later.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and ends abruptly. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and be specific.

Exemplo: In daily life, I need to remember appointments, exam dates, assignments, and deadlines. Therefore, it's important to stay organized by maintaining a To Do List and writing down all important tasks.

Sugestão: Avoid repeating words like 'prioritize' twice. Also, try to use linking words to explain why your method is effective and be more specific about how it helps you.

Exemplo: As I mentioned, I write everything down using both an online and offline To Do List. This method is helpful because it allows me to prioritize important tasks and manage my time effectively.

× this is it's sometimes stressful for me

✓ this is sometimes stressful for me

The phrase 'this is it's' incorrectly uses the pronoun 'it's' which is a contraction for 'it is'. Here, 'it's' is unnecessary and causes redundancy. Removing 'it's' corrects the sentence.

× And I took the exam at.

✓ And I took the exam then.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'at' without specifying a time or place, making it incomplete. Replacing 'at' with 'then' completes the sentence and clarifies the timing.

× such as appointment, exam dates, assignments, timing or due time

✓ such as appointments, exam dates, assignments, timing, or due times

The word 'appointment' should be plural 'appointments' to match the plural list. Also, 'due time' should be plural 'due times' to be consistent with other plural items in the list.

× and writing down everything that's.

✓ and writing down everything that's important.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'that's' without completing the thought. Adding 'important' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I use the technique of writing everything and like To Do List.

✓ I use the technique of writing everything, like a To Do List.

The phrase 'and like To Do List' is incorrect. It should be 'like a To Do List' to correctly compare the technique to a To Do List using the preposition 'like' and include the article 'a'.

× I have online To Do List in my phone and I have offline one.

✓ I have an online To Do List on my phone and I have an offline one.

The phrase 'online To Do List' and 'offline one' need the article 'an' before them. Also, 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone' as the correct preposition for devices.

× It's really helpful and useful because it's helped me to prioritize, prioritize everything important.

✓ It's really helpful and useful because it has helped me to prioritize everything important.

The contraction 'it's' (it is) is incorrectly used instead of 'it has' to indicate present perfect tense. Also, the repeated word 'prioritize' is redundant and should be removed.