Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. "Pictures memory memorizing" ifadesi anlam açısından belirsiz ve doğal değil. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha kısa ve net tutarak gereksiz tekrarları önleyebilirsiniz.

Exemplo: I'm generally not good at memorizing things because I have a poor visual memory.

Sugestão: Cümleniz biraz karışık ve tamamlanmamış görünüyor. Daha açık ve mantıklı bir yapı kurmalısınız. Ayrıca, bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlelerinizi birbirine bağlamalısınız.

Exemplo: Yes, I once forgot to pay an important work-related bill. I remembered it only the day before the deadline, so I paid it immediately to avoid any problems with my supervisors.

Sugestão: Cümlelerinizde anlam bütünlüğü ve akıcılık için bağlaçlar kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, son cümleniz biraz belirsiz ve tamamlanmamış. Daha net ve doğal ifadeler tercih edin.

Exemplo: I need to remember to pay my rent and bills because if I don't, people might think I'm irresponsible.

Sugestão: Cümlenizde tekrarlar ve gereksiz ifadeler var. Daha doğal ve akıcı bir şekilde kendinizi ifade etmeye çalışın. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlelerinizi daha mantıklı bağlayabilirsiniz.

Exemplo: I usually rely on my memory, but to avoid forgetting important things, I take notes and regularly review them.

× Generally I'm not good at memorizing something because I guess my pictures memory memorizing is not good.

✓ Generally, I'm not good at memorizing things because I guess my photographic memory is not good.

The phrase 'pictures memory memorizing' is incorrect and unclear. The correct term is 'photographic memory' to describe the ability to remember images. Also, 'something' should be plural 'things' to match the context of general memorization.

× Yes, I've forgotten something which is very important and it is about my work.

✓ Yes, I've forgotten something which was very important and it was about my work.

When referring to a past event, the verb tense should be past ('was') instead of present ('is') to maintain consistency in the past context.

× I should pay for something and I didn't pay for it and I just remembered like last day and I immediately paid.

✓ I was supposed to pay for something, but I didn't pay for it, and I just remembered it the other day and immediately paid.

The phrase 'should pay' is better expressed as 'was supposed to pay' for a past obligation. 'Like last day' is incorrect; 'the other day' is the correct expression. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× But my supervisors.

✓ But my supervisors were upset with me.

The sentence fragment 'But my supervisors.' is incomplete and lacks a verb and object. It needs to be a complete sentence to convey meaning.

× I have to pay for my rent, I have to pay my bills. They are the most important things because if I didn't pay, they will think I'm not. I'm not a good person.

✓ I have to pay my rent and my bills. They are the most important things because if I don't pay, they will think I'm not a good person.

The conditional sentence requires present tense 'don't pay' for the condition and future tense 'will think' for the result. Also, 'I have to pay for my rent' is better as 'I have to pay my rent'.

× I generally just remember, but in order to not forget it, forget it, I take notes and I always check my notes and in this way I generally don't forget things.

✓ I generally just remember, but in order not to forget, I take notes and always check them, so I generally don't forget things.

The phrase 'in order to not forget it, forget it' is redundant and awkward. The correct form is 'in order not to forget'. Also, 'check my notes' can be simplified to 'check them' for conciseness.