Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng cần tránh lặp lại và sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách giải thích lý do hoặc đưa ví dụ cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời phong phú và mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things like vocabulary from flashcards because I review them regularly. However, memorizing very long texts like dictionaries is challenging for me due to their length.

Sugestão: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh dùng từ ngữ đơn giản và thêm cảm xúc hoặc lý do để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I once left my laptop at home, so I couldn't complete my work tasks, which made me feel very frustrated.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên tổ chức câu trả lời theo cấu trúc rõ ràng, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cụ thể hơn về những thứ bạn cần nhớ và lý do tại sao.

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember important information like passwords, email addresses, and sometimes vocabulary from a dictionary, especially when preparing for tests.

Sugestão: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và câu trả lời cần mạch lạc, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về phương pháp ghi nhớ của bạn.

Exemplo: I usually remember important things by writing big notes on a large piece of paper and sticking it on the door. This way, whenever I leave the room, I see the note and remember what I need to do.

× I am quite good at memorizing things such as flash card words or books, but if it's a very long dictionary I can't memorize that.

✓ I am quite good at memorizing things such as flashcard words or books, but if it's a very long dictionary, I can't memorize it.

The word 'flash card' should be combined into one word 'flashcard' as it is a compound noun. Also, 'that' should be replaced with 'it' to correctly refer to the singular noun 'dictionary'. Additionally, a comma is needed before 'I can't memorize it' to separate the clauses.

× Yes I have. I have left my laptop at home so I have nothing to do at work.

✓ Yes, I have. I left my laptop at home, so I had nothing to do at work.

The action of leaving the laptop happened in the past, so the past simple tense 'left' is appropriate. Also, 'have nothing to do' should be changed to 'had nothing to do' to maintain past tense consistency. Commas are added after 'Yes' and before 'so' for clarity.

× I need to remember many things in my daily life such as a dictionary. I use this to do test or in daily life I usually need to remember such as password number, e-mail address and some passwords.

✓ I need to remember many things in my daily life, such as a dictionary. I use it to do tests, and in daily life, I usually need to remember things such as password numbers, e-mail addresses, and some passwords.

The phrase 'do test' should be 'do tests' to indicate plural. 'Password number' should be pluralized to 'password numbers' and 'e-mail address' to 'e-mail addresses' for consistency. Also, 'this' should be 'it' to refer to the dictionary. Commas are added for clarity and sentence flow.

× I remember important things by writing a very big notification on a large piece of accountant and I put it outside the door.

✓ I remember important things by writing a very big notification on a large piece of cardboard, and I put it outside the door.

The word 'accountant' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'cardboard' which is a material used for making signs or notifications. A comma is added before 'and' to separate the two independent clauses.

× So when I opened the door I see it and I remember it.

✓ So when I open the door, I see it and remember it.

The sentence describes a habitual action, so the present tense 'open' should be used instead of past tense 'opened'. A comma is added after the introductory clause for clarity.