Part 1
Examinador
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidato
Yes for sure. As a Chinese student when I was little, our school teachers often requires me reciting a lot of poet, poetry and traditional artist articles.
Examinador
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidato
Yes, I remember I have a very bad experience. I forget my mom's birthday party and I don't didn't prepare the birthday.
Examinador
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidato
Absolutely, I have many thing to remember in my daily basis to being begin with, I need to remember my schedules and it helps me to make a plan to.
Examinador
How do you remember important things?
Candidato
In order to remember important things, I can make a list or set a reminder to ensures the events can on time.
Are you good at memorising things?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“requires me reciting”应为“required me to recite”,且“poet, poetry and traditional artist articles”表达不准确。建议简化句子结构,使用正确的时态和词汇,使回答更自然流畅。
Exemplo: Yes, I am good at memorising things. When I was a child, my teachers often required me to recite poems and traditional Chinese articles, which helped improve my memory skills.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答中时态混乱且表达不清晰,如“don't didn't prepare the birthday”语法错误且含义不明确。建议使用正确的时态,清楚表达忘记准备生日派对的事实,并适当扩展细节。
Exemplo: Yes, I once forgot my mom's birthday party and didn't prepare any gifts or decorations, which made me feel very sorry.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题,如“many thing”应为“many things”,“to being begin with”表达不自然且句子未完成。建议简洁明了地说明需要记住的事项,并使用连贯的句子。
Exemplo: I need to remember many things in my daily life. To begin with, I always keep track of my schedule because it helps me plan my day effectively.
How do you remember important things?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答中语法错误如“ensures the events can on time”表达不准确。建议使用正确的语法和更自然的表达方式,同时可以补充更多细节说明方法的效果。
Exemplo: To remember important things, I usually make a list or set reminders on my phone to make sure I don't miss any events on time.
× As a Chinese student when I was little, our school teachers often requires me reciting a lot of poet, poetry and traditional artist articles.
✓ As a Chinese student when I was little, our school teachers often required me to recite a lot of poems, poetry, and traditional artistic articles.
主谓不一致,teachers是复数,谓语动词应为复数形式required。动词后面接动词不定式to recite而非动名词reciting。poet应为复数形式poems,traditional artist articles应为traditional artistic articles。
× Yes, I remember I have a very bad experience.
✓ Yes, I remember I had a very bad experience.
描述过去的经历时,动词时态应为过去时,have应改为had。
× I forget my mom's birthday party and I don't didn't prepare the birthday.
✓ I forgot my mom's birthday party and I didn't prepare for the birthday.
描述过去事件时,forget应为过去式forgot。句中don't didn't混用,应只用didn't。prepare后应加介词for。
× Absolutely, I have many thing to remember in my daily basis to being begin with, I need to remember my schedules and it helps me to make a plan to.
✓ Absolutely, I have many things to remember in my daily life. To begin with, I need to remember my schedule and it helps me to make a plan.
thing应为复数things。daily basis用法不当,改为daily life。句子结构混乱,分为两句更清晰。schedules改为schedule以匹配单数动词helps。
× In order to remember important things, I can make a list or set a reminder to ensures the events can on time.
✓ In order to remember important things, I can make a list or set a reminder to ensure the events happen on time.
动词不定式后应使用原形动词ensure。can后缺少动词,补充happen。